The Path to Immortality

First of all, Fenglei Linggen starts, which is cool! Secondly, the author's ability to dig holes and fill them in is unparalleled. His writing style is interesting, his ideas are novel, his logic is self-consistent, his character descriptions are spot-on, and his story is intricately linked with a beginning and an end. It's so much better! Furthermore, Kun culture and various memes are used brilliantly. It's a drama, but after all, it's three words, no problem! Finally, I love watching it🌹

Systematic, not much. There are beauties, not many. There are fights, not much. There is bromance, not much! There is nonsense, too much.

I don't know what the author is thinking. As the protagonist, he doesn't even have the Five Elements, only one Wind Spirit Root. The key is that the protagonist is very ambitious. He doesn't even have the Xiantian realm and just wants to practice Qi. The key is that the protagonist doesn't even have a spirit stone, and he is in the mortal world, but he still succeeds.

I wrote an egg. The protagonist lives entirely by the protagonist's halo. He is stupid as hell. He is plotted and targeted at every turn. He never knows how to take the initiative to fight back and plot.

Don't be misled by the good reviews. The protagonist wanted to kill him before. After the protagonist ran away, he came back to take revenge and spared his enemy. Holy Mother novel

It's average. To be honest, it's not bad in the early stage. But the setting of Goldfinger and the establishment of the sect are a bit abstract to be honest. It's not like the orthodox fairy tale. Moreover, the author will occasionally write a long useless dialogue about complimenting each other, and often use clever tricks that I think are funny. But you are not a funny and easy immortal fairy tale in essence. You don't really think it's funny when you are clever.

The protagonist has no brains and throws it away even though he knows the token can be sensed. He insists on carrying it with him.

Whoever's long-range attack is farther away is more powerful, and others have to hide. The author's setting is really ridiculous. Even pigs are better than you.

This is the novel that I feel is the most rigorous, neatly structured, and very innovative. It's very good. I hope the author can work harder. Come on🤗૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა

The logic is too far-fetched. Don't you think it's embarrassing to forcefully bind skeletons brought from other worlds? The skeleton is the boss of Nascent Soul in another world, and he is controlled by a foundation-building pony boy, haha, and then he keeps asking how to control it... Various supporting characters give you two chapters of life insights before they die, and then reveal their secrets to the protagonist and then die peacefully... Being blocked in the formation, the protagonist summons a bunch of pea shooters, and then moves to a bench to eat melon seeds. This plot can be written, haha... I know that the righteous path is about to encircle the evil path in the eastern part of the Song Dynasty, but I am the protagonist and am so anxious. No, all the golden elixir monks who were sent were killed by a single talisman and seal. Someone was blocking Yuanying's path, and someone was delivering an escape map. I am the main character, so what am I afraid of? It's all about chance; don't care how the plot develops, in the end I have to care about the universe...