Passionate Years in the Siheyuan

Everything else is fine, but I like to play with ambiguity too much. Women in the drama have to be ambiguous all the time. The relationship scenes are too bad and drag on. If you don't like He Yuyu, just make it clear. Here I'm fishing for Yuyu and there I'm going to have a love at first sight. The relationship is so bad, I gave up.

The writing style can be anything, but why do you want to be ambiguous if your feelings are hurt? Hanging for rain? Can't it be simpler? Interesting! In addition, what kind of person has not seen someone who has traveled through time? Fall in love at first sight? Are you kidding me? Just to highlight your "There is a girl named Xiaofang in the village", right? Garbage, discarded

This is the first time I have seen a novel written using the method of writing a script. Each chapter is written in a narrative style as if it were the last chapter. The content of the story is not bad. The protagonist's relationship is confused and the whole text is like an assembly line to explain the plot. Maximum 8 points

When this sister appeared, she felt pitiful and sensible. You are spoiled later on. You, the younger sister, must be satisfied with whatever kind of wife your brother wants to marry. If it's me, I'll be stricter. If you still want He Yuyu, then I don't want this sister. You can live with whoever you want, and just pay some living expenses every month to fulfill your obligations. I make money every day to support you and take care of you, not for you to trouble me every day. If that's the case, it's better not to have such a sister!

The first poisonous point is that the protagonist is too virginal and cannot distinguish between good guys and bad guys. He doesn't like to remove the roots. The second poisonous point is that there is a sister who does not see the warmth, but only sees the word number of water! The third poisonous point is that I feel sorry for Qin Huairu and her children. If you give benefits to bad people, you are cruel to good people! The children who feel sorry for her should give her malted milk instead of donating it all to those poor people! Anyway, the protagonist doesn't like to keep any good things for himself, he gives them away whenever he can!

This pig's trotters, you said you're marrying an old lady, I think it's appropriate, but these are second-hand goods that look really disgusting. I really don't understand why they all like pig's trotters. They don't know how to refuse, be blocked, and threatened. Didn't they come from time-travel? They have a way to deal with men, but they have no way to deal with women.

Emotional drama sucks

Harem stories, stallion stories, random fantasies and spring and autumn dreams

I really can't compliment this level of writing. Although I know it must be bad writing, there is no one else who can write at this level.

Should you marry a wife or give your sister a mother? If you don't refuse, you'll pass the blame to your sister. If you don't want to refuse more clearly, others will still pick on you? It's not because you don't say no to others doing laundry and cooking that other people think you are interested in her. I thought I was just going to lick Silly Pillar, but in the end I even took my sister in and raised them as a family. She also said that I really love Xiaofang. Is your true love so worthless? If there is a girl in the courtyard, she likes you. She doesn't refuse anyone who comes to you. Are you really not afraid of getting sick? You are the dirtiest