Outlaws of the Marsh and the Deer

I thought it was pretty good when I read it before, but now I feel that it is really average. For example, when I went out to the capital of Goryeo, I knew that I had to dig tunnels and dug three of them, but when I was watching Yanjing, I didn't know that digging tunnels required human lives to pile them up.

One-third of the book is about the history of Shuizhou and the biographies of Shui people. As you look at it, you just get a little bit involved. When a character appears, a long chapter about his life will appear, and you won't be able to stand it anymore.

This is a Super Stallion novel. As a time traveler, the male protagonist has no military talent and no brains to build a technology tree! Just by traveling through time, he brings the best strength in the world, develops an invincible force, and then relies on historical knowledge to fool talented people everywhere. Women are collected in piles. You heard it right, not one by one, but in piles! Go up to the enemy king's queen, go down to the slaves and maids, and drag them into the room together when they are interested! And every time, more than a dozen women come together! Except for the ones he likes, he captures the female family members of the enemy country and uses them as items to reward his subordinates to win people's hearts! I'm not a feminist, but I really can't stand such a stallion story that is so inhumane and insulting to women! Abandoned the book!

Don't use the same tone of voice for each character's dialogues, otherwise they will lose their personality. There are always interruptions in the plot, so don't treat readers like elementary school students.

The protagonist of this book is really stupid. I have also read a lot of books about fighting for world domination. Some of them have systems, such as the random intrusion and summoning system. The system will explode, and then the random intrusion of heroes. I have seen them all. Some of them are very simple at the beginning. For example, some say system sister, or system master, but as long as I get to the mid-term, I will always be system system system system. I will look at my thinking system to summon them. I will not continue to talk about system sister and system master as I did in the previous period. Because they are emperors, their majesty has begun to appear, and the protagonist of this book, I have read chapter 200 now. He seems to want to take many measures similar to our army during the Republic of China, but he has to understand one thing. He is in the Song Dynasty, and he uses the methods of the Republic of China in the Song Dynasty. Don't he think this is causing his own rebellion? He wants people to hold so-called memorial meetings and he wants people to respect equality. Do you think you can still be an emperor in this case? It's really stupid.

A lot of the plots are really nonsense! Especially in terms of combat power, the strength of the protagonist and the generals and soldiers are sometimes very powerful and sometimes very weak! There is no logic at all! For example, tens of thousands of Jin can destroy hundreds of thousands of Liao, and tens of thousands of Liao can destroy hundreds of thousands of Song! And the protagonist can easily destroy the elite soldiers of Liao, Xia and Mongolia! Moreover, the protagonist has countless generals, all of whom were the top ones at that time. The soldiers have the best treatment and training, as well as ideological education, and have countless advanced weapons. With such strength, the protagonist's 100,000 elite soldiers can't resist hundreds of thousands of mobs just for defense! According to logic, you can win even if you fight head-on, let alone just defending! There are too many similar plots like this!

It has been introducing history, and even the clothes required by the Jin Dynasty are written at length, and the name is repeated in one paragraph, which is completely a pile of words.

The plot is okay, but the large amount of watery text in each chapter is a bit disgusting.

Is in general

The writing is very good, the author is very capable, the plot is exciting, and the writing is brilliant!