The Evolution Master of the Strange World

Generally speaking, the author wants to write that growing vegetables with 💩 is pollution-free and healthy for people to eat. It's better to write about people eating cakes directly and describing them freely, and the writing style is not bad.

The subject matter is good. The power system is also perfect. However, the plot design is not very pleasing. After all, people blocked the door every time he went into seclusion, and before he finished killing one batch, another batch of more powerful ones came. Either a desperate counterattack, or a breakthrough on the spot, a desperate counterattack. It looks very cool, but in fact, when used with Goldfinger, it feels very dull. However, it is understandable that it is inconvenient to move thousands of miles with a family behind.

After reading more than ten chapters, I still can't write the background clearly. The rhythm is speechless, and I am just screwing.

What the hell are you writing? I'm drunk when an alchemist is everywhere. I'm just looking for trouble for those little Kalamis. If they just practice second-grade elixirs, it won't be solved. I'll find Cao's gang, and then I'll go to the government office to clone a third-grade alchemist. I'm also drunk. I'm causing trouble for myself.

The male protagonist is a scumbag, and this book is at the level of a primary school student!

It's too messy. It feels like there is no main line. I just write a little bit of everything, which is not fun at all.

The more I look at it, the more I pull it. There is still some imagination in the early stage, but in the middle and later stages, it becomes more and more difficult to grasp. The layout was too big, and I couldn't control it. Stepping stones were forced throughout the whole process, and various plots were copied mechanically. If I didn't have inspiration, I just adapted it a little bit. Maybe I gave up because of poor results. 7.3 Points

After starting high and moving low, I felt that the author's train of thought was a bit messed up, and he ended it hastily.

Random text, realm: Qi training, Shen refining (intelligent), laws, heaven and man, golden elixir, innate, the result is the law, the ending is directly chaotic, haha

It's boring to keep fighting and killing.