One Slash to Carve a Path Through Life and Death

All I can say is that it's good, it's so good that it's explosive, the setting is good, the writing is good, and most importantly, it's fun! It's so exciting that I can't sleep at night! One knife splits the road of life and death, and two feet step out of the door of right and wrong!

I have read 50+ chapters, and overall it is okay. It is better than most novels, with a score of 8.5 Or above. However, there are a few problems. First, it is a bit traditional martial arts style. The supporting actors and actresses are slightly awkward in their words and deeds. The second ancestor is a bad guy or childish or a virgin. I don't want to read it. The second is the background and the big ring. The description of the small environment is vague and nondescript, embarrassing; third, there are many poisonous points, which are extremely embarrassing. For example, in the beginning, the two warrior brothers desperately broke through the border, ran and made a surprise attack at a speed of 20 meters/second from 600 to 700 meters away, and were actually seen by ordinary defenders 500 meters away? The border! Late at night! What is the concept of 500 meters? The defenders are divided into groups of two, and each group is 250 meters apart. The author said that it takes 50 seconds for the nearest group to come over. After that, the raider brothers explode at a speed of more than ten feet per step, which is almost 30 to 50 meters/second, right? The senior brother rushed to kill the two defenders with one palm (pig's feet feigned death). The captain of the defenders was actually 60 meters away. He fired shotguns non-stop (is this an automatic rifle and machine gun) to prevent the enemy from escaping. How could a warrior wearing a golden bell and an iron cloth shirt with a speed of 30 to 50 meters per second be unable to escape? Then, 20+ defenders arrived. 10 Groups of people, the farthest group came over 1250 meters away (the group with pig's feet is the center)? They all stood together with guns and fired, but the senior brother rushed in and killed all but two people who were used as shields. The junior brother was captured and died. The senior brother risked bullets and killed all the remaining defenders, all the time with his bare hands... The plot was completely incomprehensible, it was so embarrassing.

Too many words for water

How should I put it? In fact, the writing was pretty good, and the structure and world view were not messy. It was just the ending that made me feel helpless.