Stop for Five Hundred Years

I've seen more than half of it. It was okay before the Undersea Man incident, but it fell apart after that. I originally liked the setting of the protagonist, but later on the battle really collapsed, the setting fell apart, and the plot fell apart. I couldn't stand it anymore, so I gave up.

Author, what you wrote is actually quite good, but I haven't finished reading it yet. I feel like you can make some changes, or you can publish a second volume. After I finish reading it, can I come over and discuss it with you?

The first hundred or so chapters were quite readable, but after I went to God's Realm, I felt that the author couldn't continue writing. The author still lacked the ability to describe scenes. I must admit that this work is very imaginative and the world view is very complex, but the author failed to write it well.

Nice!

Nice

What I wrote is a stand-alone version of the game, where one person plays it silently. Not interesting.

The writing is so bad

After eight years of walking, you can still meet acquaintances or people you have a crush on. You can step on a tiger while running. How come you have been walking in circles for eight years and then come back? You can still step on a tiger as big as you. Are you running with your head up? Another novel about getting points, which makes people really speechless.

The front is quite nice, but the back is completely invincible and not much to see.

I think it looks pretty good, what about you?