Big Devil

The writing is okay and the content is rich. But the jump is too fast, and it always feels like there is no connection. Before one plot is completely finished, another plot is inserted. Events are incoherent and have no connection.

Xiaobai among Xiaobai, the protagonist looks like he has never seen a woman in his eight lifetimes

Let's talk about the bugs and shortcomings first: 1. I said before that I don't want to accept Sophie. Let him stay in the Qiao Continent, and there was no mention of Sophie at all in the Hidden Valley. As a result, there was Sophie again at the end. 2 The last battle felt very childish, and it was very laborious to describe several of the previous mini-bosses. Open. As a result, the final boss was won easily (I really didn't understand the battle process, and I won out of nowhere). As mentioned before, Gu Tianxie could only severely injure the God of Creation when he reached the realm of the Demon Lord. Your protagonist can kill the God of Creation before he reaches the realm of the Demon Lord. Even if the God of Creation has not recovered, you shouldn't be able to deal with it. 3 In the later stage, breakthroughs are very simple and casual. The treatment of many women is basically done in one go, and it is not as detailed as in the early stage. And I have a question. In the end, you took away Donna and Rose and did nothing. The ending was very casual, and it felt like you were catching up on homework. It's not a bad ending, but it's not a perfect ending either. 4 It doesn't say why the Demon Lord came to this universe. It means that the Demon Lord somehow came to a universe that he was not familiar with and had a fight with the strongest person and got himself involved. In other words, the overall worldview of this book is still vague. The protagonist keeps fighting and killing and doesn't understand why. Okay. Let's talk about the advantages: This book is very satisfying in many places. The protagonist's decisiveness in killing has improved all the way, killing all the enemies. The imagination is magnificent and grand. It is much better than the routine writing on the market. I also like the women I accept. Very free and easy. I recommend everyone to read this book

Not as good-looking as Wuji Magic Way

The highlight is obvious. He raised his demon pet as his own son and gave him a daughter. The girl was the one who drew a lot of descriptions in the early stage. Anyone with a discerning eye would think she is one of the harem. But he sent it out, feeling like a spiritual ntr. In addition, the teacher Fanny, the heroine in the early stage, is basically not described in the middle stage, which is an obvious omission of the heroine. Of course, the most unacceptable thing is to raise the tool demon pet as a son, add a lot of plot descriptions about him, and squeeze out a lot of the main plot, resulting in too few interactive scenes with the heroine. Do you think it's appropriate for a harem novel to describe your brothers, subordinates, sons, fathers, tools, and the like?

The combination of Chinese and Western is a bit nondescript

This trick is too cruel. It takes away Eastern mythology and attacks the West. It's really boring to watch.