Disciples of Mingyueren Sect in Qin Dynasty

It started to disgust me from chapter 319, so I can only give a negative review

I gave up after reading Chapter 320 because I was unhappy because the author arranged for the male protagonist's sword maid, Snow Girl, to be the daughter of the Six-Fingered Black Man. It would have been okay if she was the daughter of the Six-Fingered Black Man from the beginning, but it happened to be forcibly deceived later on, and the protagonist also acquiesced. Then I felt uncomfortable reading that chapter. I don't care if the recognition of my daughter was a foreshadowing or something, but I felt uncomfortable reading it anyway. So I gave up. Generally speaking, it's okay. Novices and old bookworms can watch it. However, the style of painting is rather strange and there are more inner dramas. Compared with other fandoms, this fanfic has changed a lot. Over 80% of them are not from anime.

The biggest feeling is that it is too watery. It often uses long paragraphs of text to describe a small and irrelevant plot, but the content throughout the whole text is passed through in one stroke. The writing was pretty good at the beginning, with brilliant writing and a little bit of thought. Then it went all the way north. The writing and plot gradually improved as the chapters went by. Gradually, it gives people a feeling of being out of control and writing wherever they go. You are not a Taoist, you are a novelist! It can't be written in such a confusing and indifferent way. The outline is the bones of the novel, logic is the sinew of the novel, and writing is the skin of the novel. These all serve the plot. The plot is the essence of the novel. Only when there is a plot is it called a novel. The first thing that failed in the middle and late stages of this book was the plot, which was extremely confusing. Then other things followed, and it was a huge difference from the beginning. They all wonder if someone else wrote it.

Dao Skin and Confucian Bones, wearing the skin of Taoism, write about Confucian affairs. Although Taoist martial arts are used, the ideas and concepts in it are basically Confucian. The author's understanding of Baijia is not enough, but you can still read it, don't go into it too deeply.

It's really good and interesting. The more you look at it, the better it looks

The three views are quite distorted.

The previous article is wrong and the latter is incorrect

What should I say, are all readers of Qimao demanding such high standards? The quality of this book is really good. As a working person, reading this is such a stress-free experience, why are there still weird negative reviews🤔

But I still feel that the ending is a bit too fast, well, a bit eunuch. The pace of the last five chapters is too fast, there is too much foreshadowing in the early stage, and the pace of the later stage is too fast, giving people a feeling of rushing to progress.

It's hard to comment, especially the ending