Ancestor of All Demons

After reading other people's comments, I found that this book was probably written many years ago and is suitable for beginners who have just read the book. I have read about 100 chapters. His words are biased toward beginners. I have not read the rest of the book. It is not suitable for me. Well, this is my opinion after reading it. I would like to express my praise.

I was rambling here and there, going back and forth and getting more and more confused. After a few years of practice, he is better than others who have hundreds or even thousands of years of training. With one move, he can be said to be brilliant and unrivaled. But when other people have time to show off a few moves, I am also drunk by this plot.

After reading hundreds of chapters, this is the first time I have seen a novel with this kind of plot. It has been at least ten years of novels, but it is different and to my taste.

A mess. As a monster, you don't write about the physical body! Forget about writing about the seven emotions and six desires. When I saw something that I couldn't bear to watch, I wrote about repairing the knife! Is there any sword intention, sword power, and heart in the back? Brother, what you wrote is a demon, not a human being

There are so many typos that it makes me feel uncomfortable. I have no strength and I start to form gangs, even recruit my younger brothers, and lead a group of morons.

Speechless, with broken combat power, and too many poisonous points, charming girl, pure white text

Xiaobai's article, the author is really a middle school student, I feel embarrassed when I read it. When I am in danger, I am like ah ah, my fate is up to me. It is only suitable for newcomers and Xiaobai.

There's too much nonsense, it's so watery, the characters are not three-dimensional, they keep beating and beating, and they're still watery.

It's a lot of nonsense, Rory is so verbose. You can't see the exciting plot even if you skip the chapters. If you always write some incomprehensible words that have nothing to do with the plot, is killing just killing? Or is it just three or four chapters of nonsense when singing, and playing the piano to kill people? What about House of Flying Daggers and a few more chapters of bullshit.

I've read dozens of chapters, and the writing is terrible. There are too many taken-for-granted settings that lack logic~