Permanent Martial Arts

The premise is good, but the protagonist is portrayed as too arrogant. At the beginning, the protagonist simply stands motionless on the battlefield, forcing the murderer to kill several ninth-rank martial artists before rushing to his side and being instantly killed by the protagonist. This makes the protagonist seem incredibly powerful. The writing is poor and suitable only for beginners.

The End Lin Feng returned to where his dream began, to the second-floor balcony of a grand seaside villa. Looking down at his parents, wife Qu Chen, and children, he smiled. Looking back, he realized that all the people he cared about were still there; nothing could be better! Keep up the good work, author! The book is great, I personally really like it.

Some of the authors are speechless. Did they even read the book after writing it? Were those realm settings, like the Realm Lord, serious? It says there were no Realm Lords born in seven eras, then it says a Realm Lord has to undergo a tribulation every era; if they fail, they die. Where did those Realm Lords from level one to six come from? And why does it seem like Realm Lords are still the same after an era?

It's alright. The early stages are fine, but the later stages are so grand that the logical flaws become quite obvious.

After transcending the original universe, the combat power collapsed.

Why wasn't the mastermind who kidnapped his own sister killed? You think you won't seek revenge if I don't kill them? That's ridiculous.

What the hell? An ordinary person offended the protagonist, a non-human genius, and yet so many people are protecting him and even trying to kill him. And the protagonist is a hero? The author's brain really knows how to twist.

It's always the same old formula: the protagonist first disbelieves, then mocks, then is shocked 😱, then disbelieves again, is shocked again, and finally admires.