I Have a Home in Siheyuan

At the beginning, when I went to the pigeon market to buy bicycle meat tickets, I remember I was dressed up in disguise! Then without saying anything later, he changed back to his original clothes and went riding a bicycle like that, met her and went home with her, and then went home directly! If you don't even pay attention to the details at the beginning, let alone how good your writing will be later, it will only become more and more rough! Also, for example, when you took the dumplings out of space, even if you threw away the packaging, etc., No one saw you taking the dumplings home, not to mention that there was probably no one selling raw dumplings directly at that time! The four brothers and sisters in the family have not seen you making dumplings, and they will not be curious about where your dumplings come from. They are still quick-frozen dumplings, and they are also mushroom and fungus chicken fillings. The four brothers and sisters in the family will not be curious about where they come from. They didn't even ask a question, so the details and so on were too rough. For someone like me who is a bit obsessed with details, it was so bad that I couldn't stand it anymore!

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The male protagonist is ten thousand times more powerful than Superman. He is an ordinary person who has traveled through time. He is omnipotent, an inventor, a mathematician, a spy genius, a sharpshooter, and an invincible fighter... He is all about thinking. He has an Oedipus complex when he meets a prostitute. He is 8 years older than me and looks like a bird. Every woman is an acquaintance of each other. The author rubs the reader's IQ on the ground. The author's understanding of the era is insufficient.

Too young, not enough experience, too little and inaccurate data preparation (for example, the manufacturing of lighters was nonsense, because from materials to processes, it was impossible to manufacture at the time. Can advanced products be made based on drawings alone? Do you think Huawei hired people to work with S Kai's high salary?). Time travel novels are originally Y Y, but can you use some logic?

People say that you can tell the author's true nature from the male and female protagonists of the novel. I think it's possible, but am I confused? The male protagonist's brain simply shut down when he saw a beautiful woman and he couldn't walk. The author didn't consider the historical background of the novel. He kept doing it in such a high-profile manner and messed up the relationship between men and women. If the incident came to light, it wouldn't be surprising to be rewarded with peanuts.

There are many unreasonable things, but she is still the Holy Mother, grinding and chirping.

What I dislike the most is the unclear relationship between men and women! The failure of this book!

Not enough understanding of the era

Let's not talk about the writing style. . The protagonist's negative performance and attitude, as well as his right-wing escapism, were unconventional in that big era, and he even talked about a wretched development and lived his own small life. . Don't pass on this kind of thinking and attitude to others, it will mislead others! ! ! I have read so much in vain, a waste of time! !

The robbery was done for two yuan. . Selling lighters in large quantities is awesome without reading any information.

Just ask the author! Will you adopt a daughter when you are fifteen? Go away and abandon the book.