After I Was Forced to Become the Venerable One's White Moonlight

I feel like it's really good-looking, half sweet and half sad (2/3 sweet). The most important thing is that the author's ending is also well written, and both the protagonist and supporting characters are given a perfect ending! It can be said that it is the most perfect novel I have ever seen! There are only around 300 articles, which are not many. Unlike many authors who write a lot of words, here I wish everyone everything goes as they wish●°u°●

I don't know why the rating is not very high, but I think it is a good book among fantasy. It's rare to read a book that I didn't give up halfway through. The plot is logical, not monotonous, and the word count is not crammed. The protagonist is well designed (all the characters are very good. Each character is a closed loop and has its own story characteristics. The author is very thoughtful! But I like our protagonist the most, the official CP hahahahaha). I have a correct outlook on life, not so many morons, not a perverted mentality, a normal brain, and normal development. I hope to publish more books! Be sure not to miss the entire book, too!

After reading more than 100 chapters, I'm getting impatient. It's so slow. The male protagonist is not the kind who hates the female protagonist. He will pretend to be the man's waiter for adults, please him, and work hard at every step to obtain resources to climb up the ladder. On the surface, he is gentle, humble and considerate, but in reality, he is cold, distant and careless in everything. During the self-guided strategy, I first discovered that the heroine is not as cruel as the legend says, and that she is a very cute, carefree, soft and kind girl. She is no longer cautious, but dares to tease her, and she relaxes a lot. After the heroine desperately saved him, he became attracted and became closer and more eager. Just like the heroine said, I am an adult. Why do you feel that the roles have been reversed and you dare to teach me a lesson? In other words, oh, it's better not to be in tender mode, a strict father will be a strict father I saw the heroine hooking up with the original official partner here

He is clearly an eighth-level expert, but he is extremely useless! Focusing on licking the male protagonist is really a "stupid" thing to highlight. Run quickly, the pit is huge.

It's so beautiful, I cried to death. When I saw that I was about to leave and go back to the real world, it really broke my heart. This is why I don't like reading through books. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I really like this article! It can be said that there are no villains in the whole text. The biggest villain is the heroine's system. The other villains are quickly defeated. Both the male and female protagonists are powerful. There are 4 pairs of CPs in the whole text, but the description of the secondary CPs does not occupy a large space and does not affect the main line of the story. Couple 1: Rich, beautiful, and powerful, the heroine outgrows the humble male waiter and rises to become a master (the front and back are sweet, and the middle is torture due to the dog system. The male protagonist really loves love, and I shed tears when I was separated twice because of the system, but fortunately, he was still the one in the end) Couple 2: Chuan Shu No. 2, The domineering and cold female boss × tsundere, awkward love and ignorant wolf cub (Sweet, sweet! There is an assist system here, this system is just like me hahahaha! It greatly improves the success rate of CP for men and women) Couple 3: The innocent and cute heroine of the original book × the loyal and loyal second boy of the original book Big Wolf Dog (The man and woman always like each other! They are both pure, and the heroine has been so sweet since they got to know each other) Couple 4: The crow who is always talking about cheating × the cold and reserved butler (they fight and make trouble, the crow always teases the butler, and was even chased by the butler with a sword 😂😂😂)

Overall, it's good, but there are some areas where it doesn't work. There are always so many misunderstandings between the male and female protagonists. There is too much written about the supporting characters, so I don't have the patience to read it. Tired

To be honest, I didn't like the character of the heroine very much when I first saw it. I felt that the heroine was too nymphomaniac, but the author's writing style is so good that it makes people want to stop. But later on, the heroine began to change. In fact, the heroine is an ordinary person with good intentions. She just wants to complete the task and go home. What she does is not wrong from her point of view. Fortunately, the later stage was sweet and everyone had a happy ending.

Let's talk about cultivating immortality. All the money spent is money. People with spirits live together with those without spirits. There is no sect. Even if you don't cultivate immortality, you still have spiritual power. There are monsters, spirits, and ghosts. The heroine is eighth level and is so weak. There are so many flaws that I can't finish them. It's really a huge pit.

I don't know why it feels like a parallel novel. The people next to the heroine are all matched up, and it's true that the heroine's strength is really hard to see. It feels very weak. The male protagonist is given priority in everything. Why don't you want to improve yourself when you are in the world of Xianxia? What's more, the heroine has always been the original work, so you just treat these as guides, and you don't treat yourself like a normal person in the normal world. Is it really sincere to keep pretending to be a virtual world? And you are self-absorbed in being nice to the male protagonist, saying that you are just cultivating, teasing without knowing it, and being a scumbag without understanding. You really treat him as a task, don't act like a little daughter and take it for granted. There is something that cannot be negotiated or traded. You know clearly that the male protagonist is suspicious, so you can clearly say Cultivate your own power and your own people, and expect him to grow up and use it for your own use. The exchange of interests is often the most stable. There is no need to invest so much emotion and thought in pretending to be a loving son and daughter with him. Most of the time, he looks cute and does not even have the momentum of a superior.