A Doomsday Couple Transmigrates to Another World

I can only say that it is a bit bland, a bit boring, and there are not many exciting places, so I can tolerate it. However, there are many improper use of words. If your elementary school Chinese teacher saw it, he would be so angry that he would be very dramatic and couldn't bear it!

I am so disgusted by this couple. They have done everything in their two lives. There are quite a lot of night life scenes. They also have to write about the hero kissing the heroine and blushing. I am so speechless. The author who wrote this article probably does not have much experience in love. If he is not good at this kind of thing, he should write less. It will be awkward to write hard.

I couldn't stand it when I saw the male protagonist saying that his grandfather was kind to him. His grandfather bribed him with some small favors, and he may not have gone through the hardships of the original owner, so the male and female protagonists cannot empathize with the original owner's sufferings, so they don't hate the people who the original owner hated so much, such as the people in the big house, whose grandfather let him Yang acted as a villain in the front, and he acted as a good person, so he said that the family would be separated. Yang asked the male protagonist to leave the house. His grandfather was present at the time. If he wanted to stop it, he could definitely stop it. After all, he is the head of the family. How can your daughter-in-law not listen to your own will? In the end, the male and female protagonists were forced out of the house. Only less than 1% of the food was distributed. The male protagonist still thinks that his grandfather is good to him. He really lacks love. In short, the male protagonist's attitude towards this grandfather is off-putting. Moreover, the male and female protagonists have no sense of gratitude towards their original bodies. Generally speaking, if you borrow someone else's body, it is a cause and effect, and you want to settle some grudges for the original body.

How can I put it this way? After reading them all, even the ones that I like to take risks, the ones in there are all ordinary ones. If it's bland, it must be okay.

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It's very bland and ink-stained. I could still read it at the beginning, but after more than 200 chapters, I felt bored.

The author's writing style is average, and there are many mistakes in wording and sentence arrangement. In the ancient environment where filial piety was the top priority, the daughter-in-law's basic address to her mother-in-law was wrong. It looked awkward. The article can reflect that the author is a novice with no life experience, and it feels like it was written by a junior high school student. In fact, the theme of the novel is quite good. A post-apocalyptic couple travels to ancient times and uses their own powers and space to step by step towards immortality. However, the author did not write the essence of the article. He narrates the couple's trivial life like a running account. Many parts of the description are superfluous and inconsistent. The male and female protagonists are also broken. They think they are taken for granted everywhere. There is no thrilling or ups and downs. It is just a clear story. If I give it a score, it will be lower than 8 points.

There are not many exciting places, the author is not rich in imagination or bold, and lacks a sense of accomplishment.

Very everyday, bland, not my type, always busy,

I have read more than a hundred chapters and then read the comments. They are really good. The primary school Chinese teacher can laugh out loud. The subject matter is quite novel. I also want to see whether this time travel and rebirth will be followed by immortality, but I really can't stand it anymore.