I Am Jie Jiao Xian

The content is very novel, it's a good prehistoric novel, and the writing style is quite delicate, but it's just unfinished. If the author adjusts his condition and continues writing, it will be a highly rated novel, and it will be a good anime to watch.

The first part is fine, but after Chapter 97 it starts to become more abstract, and the further back it gets, the more abstract it gets.

The author believes in the Jade Emperor. He writes that the Jade Emperor is the same as the Dao of Heaven, and his status is the same as that of Hongjun. He attributes the Dao of earth and humanity to the Dao of Heaven, and writes that the saints of the Heavenly Dao are under the leadership of the Heavenly Court. Saints can be invited to discuss matters at any time. I am just a quasi-sage, but I put on more airs than Hongjun. I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 184. Pigfoot is a Jade Emperor believer, and he is a time traveler and doesn't know anything? The IQ of the Human Emperor is even lower than that of a pig. If you look down on the human race, please don't write pig's feet as a human race. The human race is not worthy of such an ancestor. By the way, do you deserve the key? Also, when writing fan fiction, can you respect the author of the original text and use other people's events and make random changes? If you want to write a good novel, start it yourself and don't use other people's content.

The previous plot was okay, but many subsequent plots seemed familiar and unfinished.

Overall, it's pretty good and quite fresh. I feel like this is the second version of the ancient novel, but the ending is a bit sloppy. I can continue writing.

Unfinished building

It's a pity that it's unfinished

The writing is not good, the logic is fluent and does not reduce intelligence.

The protagonist Hunyuan 8 is in the middle stage of Hunyuan Daluo and is approaching the late stage. The fusion of the Sanqing Pangu Yuanshen is still funny in the middle stage. He also started to conquer the black tiger mount when he was transformed into a catastrophe, and later he created a catastrophe produced by the heaven.

The author's IQ is not good enough, but he has a good hand of cards. Not to mention that he plays badly, but it's quite frustrating anyway.