Beiyuan Immortal Clan

The expression is extremely verbose. Tang Seng writes in a repetitive way. I really want to open the author's brain and see the inner circuits. There is half a piece of nonsense in one chapter. The reader is not a fool and has the ability to extend his understanding!

To be honest, it is better not to write this heroine, it is really useless, she will be jealous, and she will talk about having an affair every time they meet, which is really disgusting, or she should learn from the mutual respect and support of Qinglian Peak, this heroine Mao has no use in dealing with others. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, then you don't have a heroine. It's so speechless when you look at it like this, it directly lowers the rating👎

This novel is for primary school students! Abandon books

It's all a narrative with a small number of words. It's a jumbled mess. It's just a matter of how many meals a day I have to eat and how many bites I take at each meal. There's nothing interesting to write about.

The writing is okay, but a bit bland and there is a lot of gossip.

To be honest, I still prefer this bland way of advancing the plot. The only thing I can't accept is the heroine. The heroine in the fairy tale has not experienced life, death and hardships with the protagonist, and the heroine is a single heroine. Moreover, she is jealous. The key protagonist is still a licker.

3 And a half stars 1. Time travel fairy tale, with a single heroine (the protagonist has a strict wife, who is evil but not courageous. It was okay before he and the heroine confirmed the relationship. After they confirmed the relationship, the writing was a bit vicious. The plot is the same every time they meet, regardless of whether the protagonist is a philanderer or not). I originally thought that the protagonist was a mortal and the protagonist was average in talent, but it turned out to be a genius + a child of luck + a golden finger. 2. Gold finger: Lingzhu, function: comes with space, space and time flow quickly, as the level increases, the space and flow speed also increase 3. The plot is average. I personally feel it is a bit bland. There is no sense of ups and downs. The villain plot is also relatively clichéd, including the demon clan, the son of luck, and the routine arranged by fate. The later plot is exaggerated, especially the repeated pet trading plot. The writing is okay. Generally speaking, the requirements are not high. Those who like family cultivation of immortals can give it a try, but don't have high hopes.

Fifty thousand low-grade spiritual stones and one foundation-building pill 666

Refining the clone is a bit evil and I don't like it.

Nice