One's Way

Overall, it's good. The author is also coding the words carefully. It's worth recommending. You can keep reading when you're bored. There are also regrets in the article. First, it is bland. Although it makes readers not bored or want to change books, after reading it. . After reading it, I couldn't even remember the content. Second, the author wants to arrange a different path of spiritual practice for the protagonist, but lacks imagination, so he can only follow a path of spiritual practice other than "proving the Tao through strength" and "becoming a saint through merit"? Comprehend the "lineage of the great road" and "the principles of heaven and earth"? Are you sure this is not the rule or law for the existence and operation of all things? How embarrassing. . . However, apart from these minor shortcomings, it is still worth reading.

Well enough! The author wants to tell the story of a Taoist priest who carried forward the Taoism in another world. But this is what I came here to complain about. Is there no room for other mage professions in this world besides Dao Tong? Just a warrior profession? ? Pure physical attacks against monsters? ? Fortunately, I automatically imagined this monster as a werewolf from the West or a monster from the Great Wall. Um! Pure physics is still a beating to death. But why did you write it? ? A world without magic and ghosts? Is there still a way for the human race to survive? Thinking back to the general in A Chinese Ghost Story 3, his combat power was at the ceiling level, but he was beaten to death by a few brats. How could he fight him when he couldn't even see him? If the author wants to write a book about inheriting Taoism and carrying it forward in another world, just write about traveling to the Western fantasy world and let Chinese Taoism VS Western magicians! I remember reading this type of book more than 20 years ago. It was very enjoyable at the time, but there is no such type of book now.

After reading Chapter 670, can the author change the way the protagonist speaks? He is already an immortal who can customize rules and plan principles, and the apprentice is also a man of hundreds of years. Is it appropriate to still speak in the tone of a cadre in his 20s?

It's very low. You can only persevere after listening to it at work. You are already fighting alone, why do you still have the power? The only function of this force is the pleasure of being an ancestor. Since this is the case, it is better not to establish it at the beginning. And at the end, a child directly killed an adult strong man. What's the logic? You are awesome. Understanding the Dao in the combined state is just like picking it up. Hongjun has lived for a long time in vain, and the wasteland domain swallowed part of the dead meat of the 33rd level of the prehistoric world. It has to be eaten and digested. Later, it swallowed the entire prehistoric world without bursting. Moreover, Tongtian is obviously one of our own thugs now, so we will not slowly give the wasteland domain and Tongtian a space to develop.

The foreshadowing is okay. Later, when I got out of jail and went home, I suddenly didn't want to watch anymore. It feels like the following content is about a Taoist priest, the only Taoist priest who serves as a magic stick in the world of martial arts. Even ghosts came out, Taoist priests, can Taoism only be used to drive away ghosts? If there really are ghosts in this martial arts world, would people in this world still have a way to survive without the protagonist?

Very good, at least the spelling is correct

It is not recommended to waste your time by watching it. Just watch it patiently for a while in the early stage to think of any twists and turns later. . . Even less popular after he retired from the army. I thought this book would reach its peak after the beginning, so I started with this. . .

The book idea is good and quite innovative. But here are some suggestions: (1) Correct a large number of typos, illogical sentences, missing nouns, verbs, and subjects or confusion in order. This book has a large number of typos. (2) In the early stage of this book, I will explain the realm of Taoists and warriors. In the middle and later stages, I still have a vague understanding of the realm of warriors. Even though I know their realm, it is of no use. (3) Some things are too wordy or wordy and inappropriate. For example, if some things cannot be obtained in the short term or are not available at all, there is no need to introduce the functions, principles, environments in which they appear, and how to use them in detail like in the book. It's long-winded, just mention why you can't find it or don't have it. It won't be too late to introduce the rest when you find it or need to use it. When it comes to the key points of fighting and overcoming tribulations, I always like to introduce the origin of the exercises used, how they match the five elements of the environment, and even the background story behind them, or the principles of elixirs when overcoming tribulations. There is no need to introduce these in such detail. It's not too late to mention fighting or overcoming tribulations after the fact, or you can mention it beforehand. Writing half a chapter in the middle will be too distracting.

The plot is bland. In the early stage, after returning home from the army, he was like a holy mother. He was either on the way to salvation or on the road to salvation. Others plotted against the protagonist, but the protagonist could not detect it and could not understand it.

The setting is quite good, and the plot at the "border pass" at the beginning is pretty good, but it doesn't take long for the writing style to be bound to feet, which is extremely detailed and cumbersome. Although it is a story about cultivating immortals in another world, I don't understand that the author is actually trying to teach readers how to cultivate immortals... Will anyone really think carefully about the protagonist's method of cultivating Taoism? It's okay to just write a few words, but there's really no need for lengthy theoretical descriptions and chanting of various spells. Goodbye until chapter 50.