Zhao Zhou

When I saw Chapter 156, the protagonist's mother suddenly changed from a promiscuous woman to a concubine to a princess' best friend and the daughter of a wealthy family, I didn't want to read it.

I read comments saying that the author's writing style is average, haha, I really don't know what level they are at. In today's flood of online articles, the author is among the top in terms of writing style, plot logic, and completeness of the story. He can be called a writer, and is several levels better than those stallion Shuangwen.

First of all, the author's writing skills are pretty good! But the story structure, character settings, and plot logic are really too ordinary! In many places, the preface and the follow-up are inconsistent, self-contradictory, illogical, and confusing! The protagonist is even more of a neurotic character. One moment he is calm in the face of danger, saving the building from falling, and the next moment he is a mother-in-law, looking forward and backward. That is to say, there is no clear character or clear ideology! I am not willing to just accept the situation as it comes. In short, it can be summed up in one word: Chaos! Like the previous one, the author is obsessed with the bastard. The protagonist's mother is either a pariah or a prostitute. However, in the later stage, he has to arrange for a prominent family background to clear his name. How disgusting.

The author's writing style is so bad. He says he is a time traveler, and then he says it is not a time traveler. He was originally from this world in his previous life. He also says he was an orphan in his previous life and died in a white hospital. He has no status at first, and the protagonist likes to pretend to be aloof. I successfully went to Fucheng to study. How did my aunt find out the news the next day? Was there a WeChat notification at that time? The logic does not make sense and there are many unreasonable places.

Saw 406 Funiu Mountain. So far it's looking pretty good, even if it's a bit flawed. For example, when General Kang recruits a male protagonist, readers must be looking forward to seeing the male protagonist's next reply, right? However, the author writes in a large text that the promise given by General Kang is actually very tempting. He also explains the current male protagonist's situation to prepare for the subsequent rejection, and finally tells you the male protagonist's rejection. But the small flame of reader interest has been almost extinguished. It's like this in many places. It sounds tiring, and I wish I could just skip this chapter. It's like watching TV and inserting a small commercial for you when you see something exciting. Wouldn't it be better to put the explanation at the end of the answer? 2. I also want to complain about the fact that the male protagonist's mother is a concubine but is actually a noblewoman of a wealthy family in distress. Although the author has laid out this clue at the beginning, what makes me uncomfortable is the male protagonist's attitude. Only Princess Danyang said that she and his mother were old acquaintances. He was very excited to find out what happened to the Zheng family back then, and asked Lin Jian to investigate. It's natural to be curious about the mother clan, but he actually had a lot of important things to do at that time, and readers also want to see the progress of these things: such as preparing for exams, Chang'an style, and battles of wits and courage with various big guys. But the author insists on highlighting "Zheng's hidden secrets". Every time I write this, it's like there's a black spot on the TV screen, making people watching feel upset. (Even if Zheng's line is very important and closely related to the plot behind it, the foreshadowing is not traceable. It completely affects the aesthetics.) ——-Others are very good, the logic is rigorous, the important pitfalls are filled in, and the writing is very vivid. Even though I rarely write reviews, I gave it a thumbs up. Why? This is the only novel in 2 years that kept me reading all night long.

As soon as I saw the beginning, I couldn't help but think about the ending. The story has clear layers and the plot has ups and downs. The whole book is full of positive energy. It is a book that I like very much. Thank you to the author for his hard work and I look forward to his next high-energy work!

Author• The plot of the story I conceived was too complicated and boring, so I just made a movable type printing, which made people look at it. I was still messing around for several years. I wrote hundreds of chapters using this as a clue, so that readers don't know whether they want to develop business or enter the palace struggle. Making gunpowder is also a waste of time. Medicine plays its most advanced role, starting from doing business and going directly to politics, and joining the military. There are too many nonsense words written to explain one thing, and ten thousand sentences are too shaky. The author's thinking is still in the same place, and the reader's thinking has advanced, making the reader unable to use it, making people feel boring, and this reader is ready to give up reading.

Really so-so

The front is ok. Since entering Chang'an with Lin Jian, dozens of chapters have been filled with verbiage! Abandoning the article decisively is a waste of time

Nice