Major General Xiaoyao

On the Naihe Bridge, a boy had already drank ten bowls of Meng Po soup. Meng Po saw this and stopped him: "That's enough. Stop drinking. What can't you forget?" The boy replied dully: Why hasn't it been updated yet?

Branching from history, there are all kinds of heroes, all kinds of love and hatred, feelings of family and country, and hard-won beauties, a step-by-step development process, and a new world view. Watching and listening makes people want to continue watching and listening. I hope there will be more exciting plots, plots of loving each other, and small stories. It's better to have as few flaws as possible (such as typos, mismatched character names, etc.). In short, it allows people to continue reading the article. It is not exaggerated, outrageous, and new mysterious materials. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. I think the article is good. I recommend everyone to read it. Come on, author! Keep writing wonderful things~🎉

For details, please see the commentary in Chapter 11 Don't reply to me Liang Xiao smiled and said: "There's no need to apologize. I can't go back to this academy, not to mention you. Even if I come to beg me, it won't help."

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There was no need to watch after seeing the Huns retreat. The latter part is purely a failure. The author probably doesn't even know what he is writing. The sense of fragmentation and dissonance is extremely serious, and it is also unfair.

I can't say it's not good to read, but I can't bear to cry after turning two pages. I cry when I'm happy, cry when I'm unhappy, cry when I'm distressed, write a poem to cry, say a sentence to cry, men cry, women cry, anyway, the whole book, regardless of the main characters and supporting characters, all the passers-by cried😭It's so rich in emotion

What I wrote later made me laugh. Am I reading a novel about cultivating immortals? Why don't you add a system? It will be easier for me to accept it.

After reading two hundred chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. How can I put it, I've watched Young Man Qing Yi, and the writing style is so bad, and the writing style, I can only say I'm speechless! The plot is even more confusing

The characters in the novel cry easily, and generally think that others will shed tears casually. Either they think they are so awesome and charismatic that they can make others cry with just a few words, or they just cry easily, so they think others are the same.

The writing at the beginning may not be very good, and it's a bit messy. But it gradually got better later. If you persevere through the first few chapters, it will get better and better in the future.