Dad: I'm in College, and the Campus Beauty Goddess Blocks the Door

Not bad, I got it from the interaction with the child through the system. If I remember correctly, the system seemed to have been disabled from the time I went to meet my father-in-law. At the end, I should still be able to continue writing after the proposal. If I remember correctly, I must be a junior in college, right? There are ten chapters in a person's life but you ended it immediately after writing three paragraphs, so there is still no beginning or end!

It can be quite good-looking, I recommend ╭( ′• o •′ )╭☞ this is the person! (●—●){♥♥♥♥Family members can take a look}

The system is too useless

This system is rubbish

There is no sense of immersion at all. Although other novels are not well written, at least they make people feel immersed in it, more or less, and have some sense of immersion, which satisfies their imagination. But this novel, I don't know how to put it, maybe it is my personal reason.

The system of this novel has the least sense of existence. It only appeared a few times in the early stage, but basically disappeared in the middle stage. I don't know what happened in the later stage. I lost interest in reading it after halfway through. This kind of too bland plot seems completely boring. It mainly involves returning to my parents' home for dozens of chapters, and returning to my parents' home for dozens of chapters again. To put it bluntly, you can't see the exciting plot without assistance. Bad review!

The sentences are not fluent

Not bad

Definitely written by a female author, not highly recommended

The writing was okay at the beginning, but after the birth of the child, the two deceived their parents in various ways, which made people tangled.