Immortal Martial Lord

Everything else was good, except for the part where I went to see my mother. It was a failure. I could have skipped it and practiced hard, but she was just under house arrest. I had to go to see her, but in the end, my mother was forced to commit suicide. It is incredible that the author could write such a plot.

The writing is messy and the breakthrough is slow.

Isn't it brother? The protagonist can't defeat anyone at a higher level. He has to rely on puppets to win.

Too much criticism

A lovely stone infant who has not harmed human beings and worked hard to cultivate and successfully overcome the tribulation was attacked by a group of humans and was captured alive to make elixirs. I don't know what the author's mentality is! Last time I wrote about catching the non-aggressive Loach King to make elixirs, it was too much. If we continue to capture the baby-like Shiying alive to make elixirs, I think most female book friends and conscientious male book friends will not agree! Can't you write that it's a ten thousand year spiritual essence? Everyone can accept killing the attacking guardian monsters and using them to make elixirs! There are still many failings: Ji Changsheng, the leader of the Xuanyuan battlefield, has not been written! Yuntian's loyal character is missing. An Qiye, who is not loyal enough to help save people, successfully enters the Tiandu Territory. Wang Lei, who has followed the protagonist all the way, has no share! …I didn't want to comment on the author. After all, it's not easy for people to write. But since I've read it before, I wouldn't look like a standard reader if I didn't write down some thoughts. Just like when we go to a restaurant to eat, the food is too delicious. We can't think that the chef has worked hard and we must praise him for making it delicious!

Hey, I canceled the good review. I'm really speechless. I'm either on the way to saving people or rescuing people. After reading 100 chapters, I saved four girls and they were all poisoned. I'm speechless. I thought about girls who are not the heroines several times. When I saw others being bullied, I thought how much like my sister. Oh, this is fate. The writing has no appeal at all. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye. There is something wrong with the writing technique.

It's so messy, and the ending is even messier. The process is not like a matryoshka doll. The storytelling is not a plot. I just can't watch it anyway. It's too ugly! ! !

The old demon is lonely, why are so few people commenting?

Not bad, the post-production process was too messy