Immortal Treasure

The plot is chaotic, the sentences are coherent, the writing is mediocre, and the ending is terrible.

Well, overall the plot is pretty good. The cultivation process, while not overly pretentious, is quite smooth. The story itself is decent, and those who don't like wish-fulfillment stories might enjoy it. However, it reads more like an autobiography, which might not suit everyone.

It started off well, but then it went haywire in the middle, with a lot of plot holes left unfilled, and then it inexplicably ended abruptly.

There's absolutely no passion in it.

I can't stand it

This upgrade document is also poorly written and difficult to read;

The book spends a lot of time introducing classical stories and the origins of certain objects, which feels a bit like putting the cart before the horse. Many things could have been mentioned more lightly instead of being discussed and explained in great detail. After all, this is a novel, not a history book (not to mention whether the classical stories you introduce have any historical basis)! The stories and characters also feel disjointed and disconnected!

Are you playing the long game? Your little fairy has been watching for so long and still doesn't understand. Can you tell me quickly?

So-so.

Modern fantasy novels are unremarkable.