Immortal Treasure

The plot is confusing, the sentences are fluent, the writing is average, and the ending is terrible

How should I put it? Overall, the plot seems pretty good. Although I say it's not pretentious, it's also very smooth. As for the plot, it's still okay. Those who don't like to read cool stories can watch it. Even though it looks like an autobiography overall, it may not be suitable for some people.

It started out okay, but got messy in the middle, with a lot of holes left unfilled, and then ended inexplicably.

No passion at all.

Can't stand it

This upgrade article is also not clearly written and looks laborious;

There are a lot of chapters in the book that are used to introduce those classical stories and the origins of certain things, which I feel is a bit putting the cart before the horse. There are many that can be briefly mentioned instead of spending a lot of words talking about them and explaining them. After all, this is a novel and not a history book (not to mention whether the classics you introduce have historical research)! The story and characters also feel disconnected!

Are you taking a long-term view to catch the big fish? Your fairy baby has been watching this for a long time and doesn't know what it is. Can you tell me a little bit quickly?

So-so,

Modern fairy tales are not outstanding.