After Becoming an Immortal Venerable, She Was Sent Back Again

When I first started reading it, I thought it was a modern story about cultivating immortals and being slapped in the face, then ascending all the way up, etc., But this is the result? Just so-so. It feels too verbose. There are only two types of people in the whole world. One is hostile to the heroine, and the other is with the heroine. Every person with a normal mind and all kinds of brainless paper people are speechless when they see those people questioning and making mischief! Roughly speaking, the heroine was bound by a bad system in her previous life to do a lot of things she didn't want to do but was forced to do. He was tricked to death by a fake daughter, then reborn into a world of cultivating immortals, and then inexplicably returned to the time when he was just bound, and found out about the bad things done by the main god of the system. After a battle of wits and courage with the fake daughter, there are a lot of complicated things that follow. One issue of material research and clarification has not been completed for 3-4 chapters, and the paper man's nonsense comments alone have taken up 2 chapters. It is really too long-winded. (The emphasis in my comment is on the wordiness). The heroine is said to be very powerful, and the things she does do seem a bit powerful, but I just can't feel how powerful she is. Family members, do you know that feeling? I just can't understand how awesome she is.

It's very interesting to watch, but it has too many inner thoughts. It's really annoying to say that it's a scumbag story. From the beginning to the end, I don't abuse scumbags for half a day, but just a lot of inner thoughts. After saying this, the audience said that the audience said that the enemy said it. It's really annoying to listen to it. The content is pretty good. It's just too much nonsense and it doesn't look very good.

In fact, overall this book is okay. The reason why the review is not good is because the heroine is really too wordy and she beats her back. It made me very angry.

There are too many narrative words. Is this the author's early work? It's not as exciting and mature as the book "The Eye Master". I skipped some chapters to read it. The author should continue to work hard.

This Huanxianzun is really angry at this. I really can't stand it. I was so aggrieved in my previous life, but I didn't do anything after my rebirth!

Very pretty

Sorry, the heroine is so good at pretending. If she has the ability, she can just do it. It's a lot of nonsense.

Just for the entrance examination, I wrote a dozen or so 🙀I saw 21 and I haven't left the school yet.

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