I'm Really Playing Basketball

The first 350 chapters are really good, I can start with a score of 9.2, But they are not very eye-catching. After Chapter 350, I probably got discouraged, so my writing logic couldn't keep up, or it could be for other reasons. After Chapter 500, more and more details emerged, such as a five-year, 200 million contract in 2010. In addition, Sanguan has several bright spots. The portrayal of many characters has the effect of "rehabilitating", not "whitewashing". The plot design is also very good. The logical line of the whole text is relatively coherent and echoes from beginning to end. To sum up, 7 points is a bit too low and 8 points is a bit uncomfortable. If the shortcomings mentioned above are corrected, 9 points is not too high. Several three-view highlights and plot design are really good. Then revise the first three chapters, especially the introduction, which should make it more attractive. It is best to post the highlights of the three views in the introduction.

No brains or logic at all. In the first season, he was the best rookie in history, the All-Star Game rookie MVP, the regular season MVP, the best team in the regular season, the best record in history with 72 wins, swept all playoffs, and the finals FMVP winner. Got traded just after your first season? ? ? ? ? ? Where is the brain? ? ? ? ? ? ?

The licking and soft protagonist looks really boring

The water injection is so serious that I can't stand it anymore, so I lick the water

Seeing that 563 finally couldn't hold on any longer. This is a basketball article with positive energy, burning yourself to illuminate others. And it's still a dog-licking story. The plot is good in the early stages, but it has a very serious problem, with too many digressions. It feels like the author is chatting with himself. To be serious, 88% of the film is water and 12% of the plot. Most of the time, it's just rambling on and off. It's hard to keep people paying attention for a long time. And the story becomes more and more disastrous later on. It is estimated that not many people can persist in seeing 563.

I have read the entire book, and there are so many mistakes. I can forget everything I wrote before. I write random essays for my own amusement, with many catchphrases, which makes me feel uncomfortable. 😣

If there was a basketball novel about time and space, I think it would be great, all at the peak of the game

As many basketball articles say, storytelling is the easiest thing to remember. This book has a certain story (in the eyes of many people, this is nonsense), but the story is the only attraction. In other aspects, it is the same as other books by this author. I write whatever I dream about. The key is that the author still thinks it is reasonable. If you don't like reading stories off the field, then this book can be thrown into the trash a hundred times

This author keeps thinking about it, just like Mrs. Xianglin, thinking that she is very humorous and knows a lot.

It's the first time I've seen so much nonsense! Tai Shui starts from the first chapter!