Great Qian Longevity

There are several major elements that support the novel, including emotional routes, exercises, and rich cultural connotations. The male protagonist did not write a single one. He relied entirely on the dancing master to tell people's fortunes, cure diseases, and pray for rain. Do you think that the writing was pretty good at the beginning, but it became just so-so after entering the capital. That is because the skills were supported at the beginning, but after entering the capital, I started to give up on the skills and wrote all about fortune telling, divination, healing, praying for rain, and dancing. The writing is rubbish.

It was okay at the beginning, but it became more and more sluggish at the end, and it didn't feel any better. In the end, there was a wayward princess and a Madonna-like Fanning, which made people feel bored.

The beginning is good, but after chapter 200, the word count really piles up, and it digs a sinkhole! Zhenlongyuan, Shifang Tianlongyin and the unknown god statue mentioned in Chapter 900 all mentioned the power of the universe. I originally thought that Fa Kong would ascend or become a Buddha to another world or the universe in the end. However, the author spent the next 1000 chapters spinning around in circles until the end. Chapter 1900, at the end, he is invincible and still protecting Chu Xiong's thoughts, laughing. This author has an extremely abnormal mentality, has all kinds of double standards, and is running rampant with all kinds of selfish theories. He is a typical example of someone who drinks too much tainted milk powder and wants to harm society. A monk was assigned a brother, Xu Lijian, to cover him, and then he paved the way for the beauty, told her fortune, and escorted her. Moreover, he was only allowed to look and smell, and was not allowed to eat! ! ! 🤣🤣 The whole story can be summarized as follows: Fakong (the author) himself, because he was unable to do anything, desperately protected the emperor Chu Xiong's (a certain rich and handsome man in the author's real life) Xin'er, Yi'er, Ling'er, Duan'er, Chu Xiong's mother and Chu Xiong's eldest wife and little wife (Fei Qiong), Chu Xiong's little secretaries Li Ying and Zhenzhen, Chu Xiong's eldest wife's second child and the little wife's first child, until Fakong was forced to be invincible🤣🤣

Hammering here and there, making various forced turns, and I don't know what to write.

Not recommended to watch

It doesn't matter if there are too many typos. If you can still write randomly, it's confusing. If you don't have the brain capacity, don't write.

Extremely boring

It's hard to put it into words. It was really interesting in the early stages, but the more I read, the more boring I became. Every chapter skipped one or two chapters, sometimes one or twenty chapters, and then there were a lot of typos. About 48% of them I couldn't stand it any longer, so I just skipped to the end, only to find out that it was a bad ending? ? ? ?

The previous article is good, but after reaching the Grand Master realm, the combat power collapses. As mentioned earlier, there are very few Grand Masters. After the protagonist reaches the Grand Master level, there are Grand Masters everywhere.

Stop looking and run away