Everything at Hogwarts Is Three

The plot has enough expanded worldview settings. The characters and various species have their own villains such as the despicable Herbo, the god of death, and evil demons and devils who advocate order and chaos. The description is very detailed (the author seems to have started writing it in 19 years, and revised it again after finishing it. There are basically no typos, and it reads very smoothly) On this basis, I was able to write 4.26 Million words and completely depict a fantasy world with very little water content. This is the author's first book, which is already very good. Well, the point that I was poisoned by was the three female protagonists. At first I thought she was Penello, but later she became one of the harem and her personality changed drastically. She looked like Bella who loved Voldemort and was in charge of the military. Then there was Hermione. Her personality probably didn't change much, but these two females fought openly and secretly. Finally, it was Luna who set up the reincarnation of Ravenclaw and the use of time. The converter went to a place where the protagonist fell in love a thousand years ago. When the protagonist left, she became pregnant and gave birth to Helena. In order to prevent his daughter's soul from being absorbed by the God of Death and live to see her a thousand years later, the hero plotted to kill his daughter when she was at her most beautiful and turn her into a ghost. Ravenclaw used the faith gained through deception to become a false god, and Luna was considered a soul fragment. . Later, Luna gave birth to twin brothers and sisters. Here, the author wrote that both Penelo and Hermione were jealous of her being able to get the love of the protagonist. After coaxing her, everything was fine. They also thought that they should conceive a child as soon as possible to bring a sense of security. Well, so I feel that their views on relationships are really explosive. If there is a single female protagonist, it would be better if there is less or no emotion written at all. Except for one of Harry's harems, the other two have a bit of a role in the early stage. Later, the protagonist comes back from the time turner and is already a top wizard except that he can't beat the gods. Then he leads the family to engage in politics and achieves a strong reform of the British Ministry of Magic. Sir Merlin, the first-level one, gets soft, and the Animagus is a phoenix. . . The small group of saviors only has two fellow sufferers who work diligently to accompany them. In the end, apart from the emotional line, this book is worth reading for the exciting plot (๑•ᴗ•๑)♡

The content is quite exciting, but the emotional line is very interesting. Eighty percent of Allen's love was given to Luna, and Hermione and Penello each shared ten percent. Luna line, a love that spans a thousand years (I actually had a daughter before I was born) Hermione line, my little wife and I dominate the wizarding financial world Penelope line, me and my yandere girlfriend

In fact, I only read the first 300 chapters of this book, and I didn't continue reading the rest. The first thing I was dissatisfied with about this book was the protagonist's harem, because the protagonist was a teacher before time travel. As a people's teacher, he had a harem and had three girlfriends. I don't quite understand this setting, because according to my opinion, the protagonist's education should not allow him to do such a thing. He is an educated teacher. I don't quite understand having a harem or having an impure love. The second one is the plug-ins opened by the protagonist. I think the plug-ins opened by the protagonist are a little too powerful, and some settings are too powerful to set off the protagonist. For example, his guardian guard is the same phoenix as Dumbledore. Even if you tell me that this is because of the rewards of the system, I will not be too surprised. The author has something powerful about setting off the protagonist. In addition, the author connects each story too tightly, leaving no room for breathing.

First of all, this so-called "system has little effect" is already the system with the greatest effect among the HP fanfics I have read. Secondly, the author has distorted the settings of many people in the original work, such as Ron, who designed him as a person who can only be jealous, and Dumbledore, who made a person who even Kirin bowed to is too disgusting. The protagonist should be sorted into Slytherin rather than Ravenclaw The emotional lines are also a bit disgusting

After reading about 300 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. It was originally the HP fanfic I was most looking forward to, but I didn't expect it to look like this. The most poisonous point is the harem, which is like a GalGame. First of all, Penello is like the sister type of the new machine in GalGame. She gets close to the protagonist inexplicably. She deliberately attacks the male protagonist. In the third grade, she directly chooses to sh inside and sh outside. I also don't like her personality. 2Hermione is the kind of person in GalGame who says a few words to the players, and has a little intimate contact: "Hey~!" Then run away, and guide yourself to finally trigger the extra plot and choose sh inside sh outside. Although I haven't seen it yet, I have already guessed it. You are welcome to correct me on this point. After all, I didn't see it. 3 Luna is like the first line of the main line in GalGame. When the protagonist chooses him, he will trigger the main plot, and then a week will follow naturally, and the power of the plot will advance (this is based on other book reviews). To be honest, it is no problem to just use one line to say that there is only one female protagonist. The key is that these three lines go together and it is really unbearable. And then I really hate Penello's deliberate strategy. I feel like I am being led by the nose. I don't know what the protagonist is thinking, and he is pushed away so easily. Maybe I'll make up for it when I have time. I really can't stand it now. And I don't know if it's an advantage or a disadvantage. It's that the early writing was very professional and detailed. It's obvious that I checked a lot of information, but since I opened the love thread, I feel like it's not as good anymore. And the writing style is actually quite good (but it seems that it was taken from other literary works or something). Then the plot is also a bit boring. I'm not saying it's a fun read, but I just feel it's a bit watery.

If you don't know how to write a story about romance, why don't you write a stallion driving? It's not pornographic or unpleasant, but it's so watery. It also includes the author's diary in the text... I suggest that those who really want to find a fan to quench their thirst can read Chapter 300, and there is no need to go further.

Don't like Penelo,

The plot can only be said to be as bland as a calm lake.

After seeing Chapter 145, I was persuaded to quit. How should I put it? Maybe it was a second revision. Some content looks weird The plot is also very slow

Author, do you think it is reasonable for you to steal something from an adult wizard or a wizard who opens a shop in such a place? Nonsense, and they didn't even see the person clearly, haha, it's really like this, and you still learn hammer magic.