The Immortal in the Wizarding World

This book is well written in the early stages, and it implements the spirit of Taoism. The plot is also good, and the sadness of the eternal man facing the life and death of his friends is revealed in a light pen and ink. However, there is a bit of a matryoshka-like feel in the later stages, and the plot is slightly inferior to the beginning. There is also a very serious problem: there are an incredible number of typos and wrong words. From beginning to end, you can see a lot of confusion in people's names. Also: The reason for immortality has not been filled in, and the wizard in the universe has not been written. I still have a question: at the beginning, the protagonist was in the Kingdom of Knights and had not met any warlocks or wizards for hundreds of years. However, in the later description, various regions were classified as the territories of major warlock forces, as if every place was filled with warlocks.

Now that I have read 81%, I really like it. Maybe I am also a selfish person, and I can embody the protagonist's Taoist thoughts very well, so I think this book is very interesting. Since I have read two books, Knight and Wizard, I always thought when reading this book that it was a story about the same world in different periods, so I felt that the only bad thing about this book was that it was too short.

After more than 120 pictures, the previous ones are okay, so let's continue reading. It's not bad. You can skip a few pictures occasionally. If you like to watch something, 120 pictures or less than 100 pictures, netizens who like to watch it can take a second look. For example, you suddenly become interested in the plot of Long Aotian, the plot of the waste material's counterattack, the plot of the Urban Dragon King, the plot of a slap in the face, changing the soup without changing the medicine and pictures to show off. Plot, if you are tired of watching these and suddenly don't want to watch anymore, then you can try to read chapter 120. To be honest, I personally don't recommend it. It's too boring and wordy, and it breaks away from the dull farming flavor and mixes it with the normal flavor of the protagonist fighting monsters and upgrading. I just came in for a change. If you give me some old plots, do you think I can't continue watching? ٩( 'ω' )و Get! So that's it for the review, I wish you all a happy reading~

The plot is boring! The protagonist is afraid of this and that! It's the plot of the protagonist's learning experiment! If you don't want a woman, you don't want a house or a title! Nothing much to see!

Because I really liked the subject matter of this book, I persisted in reading almost 40% of it, but I couldn't help but give up. There are many typos and words that do not convey the meaning in the book. The classic one is that a certain word appears repeatedly in the same sentence. It is very uncomfortable when reading the book. If you listen to the book, it may be some kind of punishment. The character of the protagonist is also unsympathetic. An ordinary person who has just gained immortality is forced to be written as if he has read thousands of sails. The long-form writing is actually about the word count. In many cases, such writing does not make people feel cautious, but boring.

The story framework (or world setting) can. It is a rare work that I have read in its entirety, but to be honest, it was quite painful to "read it" because he has only one routine to promote the development of the plot, which has been firmly and rigidly repeated: Gou Cheng → Strong enemy → Group ridicule + a small number of diehards who are pessimistic → Protagonist appears as a saint → Sensation → Gou Cheng → Strong enemy... In addition, most crises have to wait until the last minute to appear, which is also one of the failures. I won't say that the combat power in the second half of the book becomes more and more outrageous, because this is inevitable. When the author said earlier that "there are not many true spirits in the entire continent," he knew that "the game is over, and the combat power system of this book is hopeless." Wrong-written names, typos, wrong sentences, and misuse of words abound. There are so many sentence errors that I, who has submitted thousands of typos, no longer want to mention them (of course, mentioning the completed book is in vain, which is one of the reasons). In short, give it a neutral review.

A small bottle of medicine, a short wait, as an immortal, victory must belong to immortality

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It's okay, but the protagonist is too stubborn

It makes no sense for the protagonist to be a dog for the sake of being a dog. I really don't know what the author was thinking.