Warhammer: The Apocalypse Begins at Chapter One

Do you think it looks good or not? Haha, sneer, even the traitors have the IQ to trick me? I can throw out any bait at will and it won't fascinate them. Then in the next chapter, he was directly stabbed to death. This fish not only ate the bait, but also the fisherman bit him to death.

I just finished reading it. How can I put it this way? I have read a lot of Warhammer fics, including Greenskins, Adeptus Custodes, and Humans. This is the first time for me to read the Primarch. It's also a fresh look at the pictures. The first part is really good, but in the middle and later stages it feels a bit watered down, but I still insisted on finishing it. Warhammer is a very niche thing, and few people read it. It is quite good that the author can insist on giving it an ending. I have seen many novels that directly cut off the update at the end, which is called uncomfortable.

After working on it for a long time, the author is still not good enough. The world frame is too big and cannot be plugged in. First, the outcome of the Nurgle War between the Four Evil Gods is unknown. Second, the weapons behind the auxiliary system cannot be thought of, giving an open-minded result. The third is the birth of a child, which digs a hole for oneself. The fourth is that the framework is too big. I wrote a few cosmic wars, but the result was just a small fight, which is not worth mentioning in the entire universe. The so-called eternal war has never been seen. 😂😂😂

Among the three Warhammer books I have read, this one is relatively good. I think it fits the background of the Warhammer article very well, but the plot is too bland.

To be honest, it is difficult for Warhammer's worldview and the path of socialist core values ​​to go together, and it is difficult to separate them after forced changes at a later stage, just like this book.

It's basically the same as the original work and worth reading.

There is too much nonsense, the first few dozen chapters are the best, but after that I keep talking nonsense, I just change the meaning of a paragraph and repeat it countless times in different chapters.

The first 200 chapters are a bit interesting, but the rest are bland and the protagonist has no role to play, and it's all about storytelling.

Mainly, this is a common problem among most Warhammer fans. The protagonist has too few roles. To put it bluntly, the protagonist of this book is Calgar, not Guilliman.

I always feel that the author is a little confused. There are many settings that he writes up without fully understanding them.