I Built an Organization to Save the World

A very good book As stated in the introduction, this book is based on elements similar to time travel + doomsday. However, compared with ordinary doomsday novels, the difference is that the protagonist no longer faces the doomsday from the perspective of ordinary people or people at the bottom, but rises from the very beginning to the survival of the entire human civilization and subsequent future development. Therefore, correspondingly, the center of the narrative is slightly shifted from the protagonist to civilization. Every time he travels through the world, the performance of human beings facing the doomsday occupies a considerable part of the content. The author is also good at describing and grasping such scenes. It can be said that he has a good foundation. In fact, to a certain extent, this book can even be classified into the category of "science fiction", because the human civilizations set in the world are basically very different, so it can be regarded as a form of human civilization under different world views, such as a world with the well-known elements of immortality, martial arts, technology, etc., To explore different development processes The performance and method of mankind facing the doomsday, or simply give it the title of "parallel time and space", and then remove the systematic elements, it can be read as a science fiction novel (the mysterious elements have been integrated and explained in the later books), because the author's description of the state of doomsday struggle is always based on reality. However, the problems of this book are as outstanding as its excellence. It is aesthetic fatigue. Yes, the author's narrative of human struggle in grasping the doomsday scene is very vivid and coherent, but it is too much and too repetitive for the whole book. Although the author assumes that most human beings are similar, this is not only a foreshadowing, but also a restriction on the framework of the novel, which has since restricted the expression and treatment of society in the apocalypse. If it were a real universe, with various creatures and civilizations constantly appearing, it might be better for a breakthrough in the framework setting, but of course this is considered another matter. On the whole, this book benefits from a solid narrative and reasonable logic. It uses a super-civilized format to explore the value and significance of human nature and survival, and shows the miracles that human beings may accumulate every time. It is a good book that deserves praise.

It is much better than other books of the same type in 7 Cats, but the pace is too slow, the word count is too serious, and the title of the book is not consistent with the content, so it is considered off topic. The writing method of this book is more inclined to the third-person perspective, and the description of the protagonist is basically zero, so the characteristics of the character are basically not felt. It can also be said that this book has no protagonist at all. He is just writing about the courage of human beings in the face of disasters, but the biggest problem is also here. The invincible buff of the protagonist is too high, making it difficult to have a sense of interaction with the entire plot, and it can also be said that the sense of substitution is poor. The protagonist is more of a bystander who gives hope to the rebels, rather than a participant who gives hope to the rebels. In fact, the writing style is okay, but after reading more than a hundred chapters, I can probably understand the reason why this book is not popular. As I said before, if you write a novel as an academic paper, who will read it? Do you read academic papers by big names in the scientific community when you have nothing to do? Stupid or not?

There is a huge loophole in the setting of the number of alien beasts in the second world. In the early and mid-term, an average of 10,000 animals were killed every day. After killing for several months, how many ferocious beasts were there? Also, in the first month, the army can go out of the city to sweep up. More than 90% of ordinary ferocious beasts and animals can be eliminated, killing them instantly, and there will be no chance of mutation. Finally, if you go from level 6 to level 4, you can easily kill tens of thousands of them. At level 2, you can kill millions of them in a day. The protagonist can delay the time for several years by himself. In the later stage, he will use points to buy equipment, which is no brainer.

"I Built a Salvation Organization" is an online novel that combines apocalyptic crisis, science fiction salvation and organization building. It centers on the protagonist Shen Yi's establishment of the "Pan-Human Guardian Association" and tells the story of mankind's struggle and redemption in the face of disasters. With "organized salvation" as the core, it combines science fiction, transcendence and human nature discussions, and is suitable for readers who like grand narratives and strategic layouts. If the character creation can be deepened and the combat power system can be improved, it is expected to become a benchmark for apocalyptic themes.

It has deviated from the topic. It has been written as a monotonous and boring story about the West being slapped in the face by the East. It always contains private goods. So why did you write it?

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Generally speaking, the writing is fine, but the setting is just messy. The main character's power as a magician is a failure. Teleporting around the world and lifting a giant city out of thin air are all Western fantasy god mode or advanced cultivation level. In addition, this book is about technology, fantasy, and magic. It's really messy when combined together. →_→

The first two worlds are good, but the third world feels like a different world. Wu Zetian disgusted me. There are many chapters, character building, hehe, forcing people to drop out of school by touching the sign, ruining people's reputations, and filing family files. Such people are the selection criteria for the Salvation Organization? He behaves like green tea compared to his peers,

The second world just collapsed. There were so many alien beasts that the sea was filled with them. I just wanted to know where did so many alien beasts come from? They were transformed from animals, so why did they fill the sea all of a sudden? Don't they need to be pregnant to give birth to alien animals? Don't those little alien beasts need to grow up? Or do they grow up immediately? Even the most fertile animal in the world has to be called big brother in front of them, and even the fastest adult animal is called younger brother in front of them. Aren't those strange beasts said to have strengthened their wild nature? Why does it feel like it's completely the other way around? They keep talking about lack of food, lack of food, but there is obviously food all around them, why do they keep chasing people to eat? I think what is growing is not wildness, but hatred towards humans, right? When those alien beasts were still animals, they could eat other animals and even kill each other. After turning into alien beasts, they kept chasing humans to eat. That is, not eating other animals completely eliminated the wildness towards other animals, and only retained the wildness and hatred towards humans. It even increased infinitely, even the basic The sense of crisis has disappeared, and I see other alien beasts dying one by one under the gunfire of humans. They still don't know whether to live or die. They just want to eat humans, but they don't eat those alien beasts that are weaker than themselves. After the end of the world for humans, it will be the end of the world for them. They will all starve to death because they only eat humans.

The writing is okay, but the plot is repetitive and drags on for too long. Ignoring the loopholes, it can be seen overall, but Wu Zetian is really poisonous, very poisonous