Livestream: Beating Up a Manchurian Tiger, and You Call That a Little Girl?

I'm not the author, but you didn't change the main characters in several of the newly published chapters, several times, and then in the last few chapters, you repeated the content three or four times without changing it, and then you finished it in a hurry and ended it unfinished. I'm really drunk. I was really looking forward to this book.

In fact, I don't want to make it look good. The wording is too monotonous. I used the word "big guy" more than thirty times when I saved the leopard. The descriptions of things are very thin, either big or small. I really feel vomiting. But the author's words are quite interesting sometimes, and his views are quite upright. I feel like he loves animals very much, but I can't give him a thumbs-up on this. The writing is average, but it looks good.

How to put it, it is indeed written about the protection of land animals and marine animals, but the foreshadowing I bought at the beginning is not mentioned at the end, and the ending is also sloppy. Even the plots in the last few chapters are repeated, so I have never understood it. The extreme ton tree mentioned above, as well as the flaws of the exercises he practices and how to modify them, are not added, so I am very confused. Moreover, I think writing, whether it is an article or a novel, should have a logically rigorous plot and a relatively solid framework. The plot in the front of the novel can be very good, but it starts to be perfunctory from looking for xj tiger, and the previous foreshadowing is completely ignored. In fact, the novel can be longer, and there is no need to end it just for the sake of ending it. But the others are okay. I hope the author can improve the next novel and not end it hastily. Thank you.

Overall it's okay

Knowing that many book friends like to read negative reviews before choosing a book, I deliberately wrote a negative review: I have only read more than 300 chapters of this book. Although there are some typos and some logical errors in the beginning, overall, this is a very good book (the author ended it suddenly, and many people commented that it was unfinished). , I think it may be the truth that the author wrote - after all, it happened more than once that the author stepped on the sewing machine because his writing was so good.) Finally, I would like to say: This is a good book with a very upright outlook. Book friends who like small animals can read it, with a slightly fantasy color.

It's good to read, but the last two chapters are repetitive and a bit uncomfortable to watch.

I can read it, but there are some typos, and the last two chapters are a bit confusing, but it's not finished. The biggest impression after reading it is that it feels like time. . .

The overall feeling is pretty good, but the last part is a bit repetitive and unfinished... I feel like that, and I have mixed feelings.

No, the ending had to be so sudden?

Protecting animals is everyone's responsibility