A Chaste Tycoon? Then Who’s the Little Crybaby in Her Arms?

How should I put it? I feel that the author is not very old and his writing skills still need to be refined. But so far, the female protagonist is indeed the best. I don't see the male protagonist being better than the female protagonist. This is more to my liking. The author should be a cute little girl. The whole article is more about profile and psychological description, and the emotional line between the male and female protagonists is not particularly clear, but I still have to praise the author that she really loves her female protagonist!

The heroine is very powerful, but there is no description of how powerful she is. She has a very powerful background and knows a lot of things, so it's okay.

The plot is a bit watery. I feel that the heroine is very powerful, but there is no description of how powerful she is. She only has a strong background and that super power. I feel that there are not many scenes described and are dispensable. I don't know why the heroine will lose her wits when she meets the male protagonist. The plot is a bit high and low. The front is very attractive, but there is nothing interesting in the back. I would like to make a suggestion. The author can add a plot of the heroine and the villain to fight wits and courage in the plot. In the later stage, they can add more fighting scenes. Otherwise, the heroine's strength will feel a bit unreasonable.

The male protagonist has gynophobia, so there are no weird plots like Green Tea and White Lotus. The storyline is mainly written around the female protagonist, her connections, strength, etc. The author likes to describe the psychology of characters. Many of the jokes come from psychological descriptions. The language is very relaxed and it is worth reading.

Doesn't highlight the heroine's strength

I think I can write about the things about the heroine's waistcoat. It's just a little exposed, that's what I like better, because I think it's better to let them know than to keep it hidden.

Generally speaking, the writing is very good, the plot is interesting, the transitions are natural, and the emotional lines are also interesting. However, the author loves to skewer too much, which makes it very uncomfortable to read. I feel that at least one-third of the words are skewed. And when I read it, maybe because the author kept talking about it, he had a lot of "inner thoughts", which led to a single character design. Basically everyone has such a funny personality, which is very boring. Even an animal can be used as a character, and dozens of words can be made out with a roar. Everything else is pretty good.

It looks good, but I feel like the author really likes the word water. The author really likes the word water.

Absolutely perfect, I haven't encountered such a good novel in a long time (the novel here refers to Ma Jiawen)

It's quite good. I've already read half of it. I've already read the novel. I don't need to think too much. It's good if I can enjoy it.