Starting in Naruto as the Mastermind Behind the Scenes

The plot is pretty good, the look and feel is good, and the writing is okay. However, the setting is a bit flawed, which made me unable to watch it. Let's briefly talk about the flaws: 1. There is no level classification for the skills acquired by the protagonist, but there is a clear division of ninjutsu in Naruto, which results in the protagonist almost 100% blocking when using skills to resist ninjutsu. However, the fact is that it is difficult for readers to clearly understand whether your wind barrier is C or A, or is it an S-level ninjutsu? Why can a C-level person block an A-level ninjutsu? 2. Similar to the above point, assuming that the protagonist's wind barrier is equivalent to an A-level ninjutsu, how can it block the attacks of many advanced blood succession limits and S-level ninjutsu? Unclear classification of levels will lead to a collapse in combat effectiveness. You must know that the protagonist is not someone like Madara who can use low-level ninjutsu to produce S-level ninjutsu effects at the beginning. 3. When the author describes the character of Naruto, he sometimes has an overly subjective tone. For example, Obito is not that weak, Konan is not that strong, and the Seven Ninja Swordsmen are not that easy to control. You must know that each of the Seven is an elite Jonin level, and the protagonist is not completely Kage-level when he meets them, and the description of the battle is not satisfactory. This can be seen from the protagonist's brainless victory over the ghost full moon. Finally, to summarize, fan fiction should have the characteristics of the original world, such as the assimilation of skills and ninjutsu levels, and should not be blindly strong or blindly hack a character. At the end, I hope the author will get better and better. I will say goodbye here and we will meet again at the end of the world.

The plot is seriously unreasonable. Before the system, an ordinary boy could fight against Uchiha Itachi after the clan was wiped out. The combat power collapsed very quickly. He reached Jonin within 20 chapters and then dragged his feet. Here and there, 40% of Hokage ended. Then the combat power completely collapsed, directly 5 million. Then the pirates from another world obviously have the strength to push forward. Beat Kaidou in the east, Whitebeard in the west, and then go to the navy to beat the three generals. I don't know what you think about the last chapter. Skip directly to Marvel. Then let me ask you why Douluo's equipment was used in the final battle. The combat power collapsed so much that any skill can be used to push it aside. It's ambiguous but there is no result. I'm very disappointed😞 After watching it for so long, I thought it wouldn't be bad in the future.

Generally speaking, this book is well written and the level is not low. I also read a lot of people's comments and thought that the characters in the plot were too low. The existence of world levels makes the world's power system have different levels. Different world rules also make many power systems unable to exert the same effect in different worlds. For example, the Reincarnation of the Earth is a ninjutsu created by the second generation Hokage. It is in line with the rules of the Naruto world, but it can be used in the Bleach world and the One Piece world to have the same effect. Obviously the rules of the world are different, and the world a person enters after death is also different. It is unreasonable to use the rules of other worlds in this world, so why do I say this book is not bad! In fact, according to my understanding, it can be done from two aspects. First: the protagonist does not use some ninjutsu or spells mechanically in the process of growing up. When the protagonist understands and understands the rules of the world, the power of some skills can be optimized or enhanced. After all, the fire escape used by Uchiha Madara and the fire escape used by Sasuke The difference in power is huge. This is due to the different understanding of skills, deciphering and rules. This can explain the reasonable result that the protagonist can use and enhance the power of skills in different worlds. The second is: the author has set all the rules of the world he uses to be the same during the conception. The rules of every world apply! In other words, they are all compatible. It makes sense if you understand it from this aspect, so I think this book is pretty good. As for the situation where the characters in the plot are excessively reduced, I dare not say that it is pure nonsense. It has not been particularly excessive before. For example, the teleportation technique in the Naruto world and the instant step in the Bleach world are indeed very powerful in the Marvel movie world. Note that I am talking about the Marvel movie world, and the speed of the superheroes in it. There are not many that are faster. Take Thanos, the strongest, for example. He was not as strong as Naruto described in the battle in Avengers 4. He was just strong in strength and physique. Therefore, after growing up in several worlds, Naruto could make up for his physical shortcomings and sweep across the Marvel movie world. The only setting that I don't understand is that the power of the reincarnation of the dirty land should be constant and cannot be enhanced through time or practice. The maximum power is to return to the power limit after death. However, Uchiha Madara, or the bearded man, Senju Hashirama, etc. Are indeed enhanced after the reincarnation of the dirty land. The theory given is that the limit is broken after experiencing different worlds. This setting is relatively unreasonable, otherwise it would be a bug. The reincarnation of the dirty soil has unlimited life, unlimited blue bars, unlimited physical strength, and can become stronger through practice. This is the perfect Wind Spirit Moon Shadow! It should be said that they are even better than Feng Ling Yueying, because they can break their own limits, which Feng Ling Yueying cannot do. I feel tired after typing so many words, but overall this could have been a good read. The most important thing is that there are three of these worlds that I like. No way🤷‍♂️

It's pretty good. I especially like to see this kind of behind-the-scenes plot. The combat power may be a little bit broken (based on other people's comments). I'm not very familiar with the setting, so in my eyes it actually feels okay. There is a reaper. I watched the part about Death three or four times!!! That setting is really delicious!!! This is the prettiest one I've seen so far among Bleach.

Here I strongly recommend the Death chapter of this article How to say? You'd better read it yourself!!! There is no heroine. I think this is the most perfect Naruto novel I have ever read. I don't care much about the setting. The main thing is that the plot is smooth and enjoyable. From these two aspects, I think this article is invincible. It's really good to watch, I hope you all can watch it for yourself!!! Let me say it again, Naraku Uehara is really handsome!!! One of my favorite behind-the-scenes articles!!!

Very exciting, but lacks some color

In fact, this book should have ended on Naruto's side. . . It seemed awkward. . . Especially the main character looks like a fool. . Straight men are not fools, okay? There was a lot of ambiguity, and I don't know if there was a breakup after the first time. Anyway, I didn't even see the kiss 50% of the time. . . I found that most of this software novel is eunuch style. . .

Read As for behind-the-scenes writing, this book is definitely at the ceiling level.

It's so awesome, it might as well be the twin powers of Naruto

It's okay, although the logic is not very high... But it's not a big problem, you can still watch it