The Iron Empire

The writing is okay What a plot! I really decided to quit after reading Chapter 10 You are right to have black technology, and you are right to impart knowledge. But apart from the caltrops at the beginning, what about the lathe as soon as you start? It's a bit ridiculous. Shouldn't we start by upgrading the tools in production? The common people are going to open up wasteland, shouldn't they get a batch of useful knives and sledges? What you have here is either a lathe or steel... Can this thing be made in a day or two? Considering my own situation, I only have two maids and a housekeeper arranged by my mother. In this case, once the steel is obtained, it will be too moist for life, right? Shouldn't we do it step by step? First let the common people clear up wasteland, and at the same time teach the craftsmen to improve their tools (starting with simple ones, because the input is less and the output is faster), and then the salt production can be carried out simultaneously.

Mainly because he travels through time with a halo, the protagonist invents guns, why do foreigners also have guns?

I saw this on other websites around 18 years ago. Many characters in it were written backwards, resulting in many mistakes. For example, in the part about King Yan and King Huainan, the person who wanted to fight King Yan to win over King Huainan turned out to be King Yan instead of King Huainan. There are countless similar errors, and there are also errors in the data. I remember when I looked at it on other apps, there seemed to be a lot of errors in the conversion units of tons to kilograms, kilograms, meters to feet. I don't know if they have been changed now. The only advantage and the biggest highlight is that the development of science and technology is written in great detail, and then it is about how weapons evolved step by step. First it was a matchlock gun, then a flintlock gun, and then a rifle gun. This is like a logic monster. People who like reasoning and analysis will like detective novels. If you are such a person and also like adventure and excitement. Maybe you like ghost rules. This novel is good news for military enthusiasts, especially those who love the evolution of weapons after the industrial revolution, because it is indeed written in great detail. Most historical novels are written from the perspective of machinations and human nature, focusing on these aspects. Even if there is not much mention of science, this one is not bad. The only problem is that the points I mentioned as uncomfortable have not been corrected yet.

This book is an old book from six or seven years ago. At that time, it was considered very good in the category of alternate history. When I was in high school, I loved reading this type of novels the most, such as Tang Brick, The Court of Wei, etc. I used to stay up late in the dormitory looking at it on my phone. Looking at it from my current perspective, there are many unreasonable things about these books, but I think it's good to review them. (｡ò ∀ ó｡)

90 Points! To my liking

It can be seen that the author is very careful about this book. When it comes to professional historical knowledge, you should check Baidu. After all, the description is very stereotyped (probably because of the technology tree). His technology is completely copied step by step according to the development process of Europe and the United States. (The military uniforms are exactly the same as the musketeer tuxedos in old Europe. It's so funny). The technology tree that succeeds is also the technology tree that fails. Overall, there are many shortcomings, but it is not a brainless article. You can still learn.

The plot and writing are okay, but there are some things that are too unrealistic, personal opinion

After developing technology for a long time, I still feel that it is lagging behind. Goryeo and Japanese barbarians still have so many vassal kings, and they are enemies of the whole world. As a result, after a long time of technological development, I still feel that it is not as good as Western technology.

I think it's okay. Much better than others.

I do not understand. Why did you write two books of the same genre and content?