Poor Lord

After reading more than twenty chapters, I saw a group of children, not the protagonist, but a group of children under the age of ten, without the innocence, ignorance and cuteness of children. They looked, sounded, and had the mentality of adults. I really couldn't stand it anymore. It was so disgusting.

Even if he didn't make the first woman he met become his wife, he actually let the second woman give birth to a child. As a time traveler, should he care about his origin? Is the author out of his mind?

After reading Chapter 190, I really can't stand it anymore. Zhu Meng took the risk and took the water route to escape for his life. Since he caught the man and intercepted all his belongings, why did he put himself in danger and continue to take the water route instead of changing the road and taking the land route? If you take the land route, at least there will be official escorts along the way. The author rubs the reader's intelligence against the ground. A 12-year-old child is 170cm tall. Do you have any common sense?

This book has a rigorous structure and vivid characters. It is truly wonderful!

I have read Chapter 50, and the more I read, the more wonderful it becomes, and I am not disgusted with it, so I am posting this review. The author is very knowledgeable. That's right, I'm using "profound knowledge" to describe an online novel author. Ben Details that are on the margins of history but are closely related to the lives of Song people appear many times in the book. Such as the provincial system, Zhu Dao (referring to the pen), and Journey to the West chose woodblock printing (careful book friends will find that movable type printing has been invented at this time, but in fact, until the end of the Northern Song Dynasty, movable type printing was not popular due to high costs and other reasons. The author is aware of this and why) The words and sentences in the front are also more particular. The whole book only has more than 3 million words, which is short and concise in today's environment of two or three updates a day. So far, although the narrative rhythm is relatively gentle, it is also very full, with a lot of background supplements and foreshadowing. If it maintains this level in the future, it will most likely be used, and it will most likely be a good work. The ratings of this author's books are all above 9, but they are lukewarm. In comparison, another book with the same title is simply anticlimactic, watered down, and yet still extremely popular. Strong Amway! A must-see!

The plot is rich, the characters are rich, the plot is rigorous, and the organization is clear. It is not an unrealistic time-travel novel.

I've read about two hundred chapters, but it's really boring. I can't stand it anymore. Some small things are written all over the page, and the male protagonist's strategy and wisdom are revealed. It's like boiled water. Reading any more is a waste of time.

All I can say is it's okay. Overall, it is more readable than the other novel of the same name. But there are too many loopholes. Children of several years old cannot be so safe today in the 21st century, let alone the Song Dynasty. It feels like the children around the protagonist are all time travellers, and the adults are all children. The plot is actually okay

I've read dozens of chapters, and the story and writing are both good. I just don't quite understand why I started writing it when I was 6 years old. In order to establish a relationship with Yue Fei since childhood? He is a kid, so some words and things are really inappropriate to write about children.

Outside of the protagonist's halo, there are no advantages to traveling through time. The plot has its ups and downs, but is more of a straight-forward narrative. If the author directly wrote a story about the history of the Song Dynasty, the effect might be better. It's too dull, one parting and two enjoying.