The Great Calamity Lord

Everything was good in the front, and it was good here with the double leaders of the Six Paths Great Bidan Formation. Suddenly, a foreshadowing was forced on Fu Dao to also take the leader, which was acceptable. I thought it would end here and compete for the first place in the Dao. The four leaders felt that there was nothing poisonous about it, but I opened the directory and saw that I was going to participate in the Qi Dao again. I also specifically said that I was not prepared to participate in the Kendo after listening to other people's opinions. It is estimated that the next 99% will be the leaders of the Six Dao, which is a bit poisonous. I am omnipotent for the sake of being omnipotent.

In fact, there is nothing wrong with the plot and narration, but the characterization seems too intellectual and too young. The protagonist always likes to repay evil with kindness, and also likes to pretend to be a domineering CEO in the process of repaying evil with kindness. The woman who makes things difficult for the protagonist and makes small moves in secret and overtly begins to cling to the protagonist after seeing the strength of the protagonist. A normal person would have been with this woman for a long time, but the protagonist is actually helpless against the woman who is obsessed with him, and is even a little bit happy? It's lustful and stupid, and it insists on portraying the protagonist as smart and perceptive. I can only say that it's a primary school student's novel.

He was poisoned to death. A demon king is about to come. The five major cultivating sects are immediately scared to death. Dad, I was wrong. Don't come. The protagonist will be killed by you. There will be internal fighting and you will kill demons. What's your balance point? 5 Major sects don't even have the corresponding upper-level strength. It's a waste of my time. All the foreshadowing in front of it has become shit.

The beginning of the novel combines the appearance of the characters. The story is not thrilling, but the story is told like peeling off bamboo shoots, layer by layer. From the perspective of literary appreciation, it is very ingenious. Combined with the advancement of the plot, the character's personality gradually becomes fuller, his personality grows more personalized, and he is closer to the human environment. This is a very successful shaping technique. The flower of writing is spent on philosophical thoughts, metaphors, life-oriented, personalized and character-oriented narratives, dialogues and psychology. Readers are recommended not to miss this masterpiece.

A novel with a strong sense of justice. It's awesome! Fangyuan!

There is no stallion, no harem, no bad taste, no brainless pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, and there is no plot where a lot of novels on the market have the same tailor coming and going. In addition, it is quite deep in some places. It is rare to see a serious novel in these years. The coherence and foreshadowing are also well collected. I highly recommend this book and thank the author for not being as unconventional as those seriously homogenized novels. This is the first time in a long time that I have not skipped any chapter and read the book word for word. I am ready to collect it.

The first part is pretty good, but the second part insists on sword practice and fighting with the sword, which is inexplicable. In a novel about cultivating immortals, cultivation is the main thing. The protagonist is so powerful in Taoism, why do you have to make up the word count to fight with the sword? It's not a martial arts novel, so you have to have a transcendent sword technique.

The previous book "The Sky Skip" scored 9.1 Which was pretty good. How did this one get the score of 9.3? This book is really long and the three chapters can be read as one. When I left Qingyun Sect, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was a complete mess!

How should I put it, something was wrong from the moment Wu Qing targeted him in the sect. Later, when he went out to slay demons and eliminate demons in the sect, the protagonist showed his strength and fell behind. The key is that the protagonist can't do anything to her? In a word, the characterization is not good

In the novel named Fang Yuan that I have read, you are the most holy and fw one.