
The Supporting Female Lead Gets Competitive in a Cultivation Novel
女配在修仙文里搞内卷
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 3.1M Words
- Genre
- Fantastical Romance
- Subgenre
- Eastern Fantasy Xianxia
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qimao
Synopsis
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1.5kChapters
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1.1kReaders
11kMust-read votes
9.5Score
2.7kRatings
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There were many times when I wanted to abandon the article, but I endured it and read it. I originally wanted to give it a neutral review, but as a picky reader, I persisted and read it, so I will reluctantly give it a favorable review. One thing to say, the plot still has some new ideas and highlights. The female protagonist has a good personality, upright views, strong abilities, and a strong will. There is also an equally excellent and tsundere male protagonist who accompanies her from beginning to end. Unfortunately, by the end of the drama, they are not really together. There are also the Feng family members who are very loving and have a big picture view, the teachers of Tianyuan Sect, the beasts of the male and female protagonists, and the female protagonist's sister group. In terms of the creation of positive characters, they are all very popular. The biggest problem is that all the villains and passers-by are forced to lose their wits, and the idiots' love brains jump from the beginning to the end, which lowers the level of the whole story and makes the protagonist's halo look particularly low-level. Personally, I think the good and the villain are evenly matched, which can better highlight the excellence of the protagonist and the excitement of the plot. In addition, the article often uses comments from various passers-by as supplementary explanations for the plot, which seems particularly wordy and highlights the brainlessness of the people in the environment where the protagonist lives, which makes him unpopular.
The first third is very well written, and the heroine works hard without being sensational. From the second half, I don't know if the author wants to highlight the heroine's personal charm, or if he just likes this writing technique. Every time something happens, there must be a group of passers-by at home chatting endlessly and stepping on each other. Every time, every time, it is like a foot wrap, smelly and long. I can only skip and read. It is just a waste of word count, which ruins the sense of reading. The most unacceptable thing is that when I push it, I clearly write that there is no Cp, but after entering the third third, I have been matching him all the time, and even said that I am accompanying him silently. Alas... Is this a breakthrough of the bottom line??? The reason why I didn't give a bad review is because the author worked hard to write it, but I thought it was even harder. The heroine was so hard to write that she was so overwhelmed. Overall a very disappointing book
I didn't insist on reading it. Compared with another book with a similar title, "I Cried the Whole World of Immortal Cultivation", there is still a big gap. It's great for friends to grow up together, but the supporting characters are a bit intellectually and stereotyped, and the descriptions are too detailed and inappropriate, which makes people lose patience.
There are many instances of female competition. Lots of speechless plots. Every time I describe the matter very seriously. The heroine solved it gently and gently. Just to highlight the halo of the heroine? And everyone knows that Buran likes the heroine. As for the heroine, she doesn't know, is this just pretending or not? Moreover, Bu Ran likes the heroine, and he also likes her inexplicably. From the beginning, I always felt that the heroine was treated as a junior and a relative to take care of. Suddenly fell in love? Why? Just because she practices hard. Just work hard and make progress?
It's sick, all the members are brainless and have too much sex education, and the whole article is like a violation. The heroine's sister is so invincible that she presses a man on her chest and into her arms. She is really angry and laughs. The male protagonist is also really intoxicated and keeps praising his appearance. The author likes her so much that he is married. The male protagonist is not interested, but his cultivation is exactly the same as that of the heroine. And the supporting characters, especially the women, all like the male protagonist.
It's good to watch. It would be better if there were more chapters at the end about the sweet love between the two main gods.
Bu Ran is really good. Is there really no extra story? Can Bu Ran and Wan Wan really not be allowed to be together?
As someone who has read it 8 times, here's my review: First of all, the writing is not very good, so don't read it if you don't mind. There is a senior brother in Wanwan. If you mind, please don't come in. It's not completely CP-free. If you don't mind, please don't enter. But the recovery is really strong, and I can survive many times, such as the death disaster and the way of heaven. Sometimes the descriptions between CPs may be a bit like boss literature (such as early morning CP), but they are still very sweet. The character of Wanwan is soft, and he can knock down ten gods with one punch. The main plot is the growth story of Tuanwan from a little girl in the mortal world to a main god. The world view is very vast, and what I thought was a journey through the book is actually destiny. I quite like this setting. What's outstanding about this book is that it contains foreshadowings, every one of which is spot on, just like Su Qingyu's book. Generally speaking, it is highly recommended. If you like fairy tales, it will not be a loss for you to invest.
The first part is fine, I suggest you stop reading it after reading the first part. The second part is all about describing and playing with the appearance, and every thing the heroine does in the later part is praised so much by the author. You can read the first part as if it's no CP, but the second part is almost nonsense, and there are so many descriptions of their little ones that my head hurts. Don't look at the short time I've been watching here. I've been watching this thing for two or three days. I tried to think of any good military information behind it, but I couldn't find anything. I belong to the listening genre, so the more I listened, the more angry I became, and I almost blew up my listening software.
A book, I come here and I go. . . . .