My Disciples Are All Qualified by the Emperor

Let's not talk about whether the novel is good or not. As far as the structure of this novel is concerned, the author is considered a talent. The story with Lu Changsheng as the main character and the disciples as the branches is really imaginative. Everyone is like a protagonist, but sometimes the priorities are unclear and the details are not handled well. If the details and story are handled well, it can be regarded as a masterpiece.

Overall, it's quite good. I personally like this kind of novel, but the writing style is indeed relatively light. However, I don't really care about these when reading online novels. Some of the humor in the characters and articles is still pleasant. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The plot is good, but the writing is lacking. Che Zhulun talks back and forth, repeating the same words many times, which is annoying to watch. For example: Can the relationship between master and apprentice be terminated? Waiting online is quite urgent. Is xxx already bad on the street... It can be seen that the author is a little short of words. Moreover, the protagonist's eldest disciple is so murderous that he is also known as the Sword Heart. He keeps yelling at me. He is just like Tang San. Can he learn from Xiao Yan?

I like the character of Lu Changsheng. It feels very real. He has the ability to do things but is too lazy to do them. But he doesn't care about the things he does. I love him. I love him😍

The combat power collapsed in the early stage, and all shadow kills were queued up to deliver, and the supporting characters everywhere were mindless. The text is indeed difficult to describe in one sentence, mainly due to the lack of vocabulary and a bit of a drama. I have been reading books for more than ten years. The writing style is probably above average, but the plot is a bit scattered, so I might as well forget about writing it in a running account style.

There are hundreds of chapters, all about the apprentice. Who is the protagonist? A book put together by several protagonists. What are you doing here?

It's not good looking, and the writing is mindless. I've always been curious about how this type of book became popular. The protagonist is just like a kid with a nuclear bomb launcher. There are all kinds of exaggerated rewards in the book, but the protagonist is still like a fool who doesn't know his own strength. The protagonist is a fool and doesn't know. The author is obviously not good at writing and doesn't know how to write. The protagonist is very strong. What is his strength? Have no idea! The protagonist is very strong in alchemy, how to do it? Have no idea! The protagonist's formation is very strong, how to do it? Have no idea! When asked, no one said a word. When asked, they just practiced casually, just like that.

Disciples are mindlessly cheating. The more they listen, the more disgusted they become, confusing right and wrong, and lowering their IQ. This kind of cheating based on the operating rules of real society is unreasonable and demeaning. Since you are cultivating immortality, then I suggest you create a floating society before cheating. The Mu Fusheng style of hanging is obviously much more comfortable. Others are okay.

It's too watery (눈_눈). I can still read it at the beginning, but at the end it's all just pretentious for the sake of showing off. I read about 400 chapters in two days and decisively gave up on the book. I felt that the plot was just a blur. I didn't remember anything memorable after reading it for two days. Basically, I forgot about it after reading it.

I originally wanted to dig a hole and fill it with shit. I originally thought it would be a cool article, but I couldn't read it with my head in mind. The fun would be gone. In the end, the hole couldn't be filled. Let's talk about the killer incident first. Since the woman didn't come forward to pay for the murder, why did the unpaid killer know about her existence? So lax? When talking about Buddhism, when you begged for mercy, you said you had your own mission, but it turns out that your mission is to continue to fight against the protagonist? Where did he have the nerve to beg for mercy at that time?