The Eldest Daughter

The text is obscure, lengthy and has too many characters. The story line is too long. My head is dizzy. I patiently read the first few chapters, but I couldn't stand it anymore, so I skipped to the end to read the ending. I have to say that the author's writing style is very good and his literary skills are profound, but the story structure of the whole text is messy.

The plot is dull, the psychological activities of the characters are too complicated, the plot of the events is serious and long-winded, and it is dizzying to watch.

Whether the author was drunk or because of it, he actually used the word "retirement" and repeated the middle chapters over and over again. He was really speechless.

The framework is too big, and the main conflict is sharp at the beginning, but later on, the pie is too big. The parents of the East and the West said that the main conflict should be downplayed. How attractive can it be? It's inevitable that I can't watch it anymore, but it's a pity that the writing style doesn't match the narrative concept.

The subject matter is okay, but it's a pity that there are too many repetitive chapters, and the plot of this book is cumbersome to write.