I Want to Become a Phoenix

I read Chapter 1016. The author's writing is very good and the plot is exciting. However, this one is not my favorite type, and I was a little tired of reading this book, especially what happened when the heroine returned home. In dozens of chapters, the heroine almost I didn't say anything. I just saw other people gibbering in front of me. The heroine is obviously very powerful, but she has to be sprayed again to show it. It feels too strong to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, and I also feel that it is a bit pretentious. If she just reveals her strength, everything will be solved. The frame is too big, I don't want to see it

This is my second read. Ye Qingtang is one of my favorite female protagonists. I also like Little White Tiger, the idiot who grinds and chirps. I also particularly like this kind of novel where there is not much love between men and women, and the female protagonist grows up independently. When I read the novel, I really felt that Ling Yan was very smart. It's a pity that I don't know the final outcome of Jiang Yiran and Jiang Shaobai. I like them so much😭. It feels a bit brain-burning. Only after watching the end can I understand why. Can there be more books of this type? The kind where the heroine grows up alone does not require too much emotion between men and women. One thing to say is that in some places, the heroine is too pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. In the future, the heroine can be allowed to talk more. I feel anxious when I see it.

The plot content is intertwined. The heroine Ye Qingtang is a perseverant person who must retaliate. She does not have the heart of a virgin but values love and righteousness. Through her own efforts and the hero's various timely help, she finally becomes a strong person and changes her own destiny. The identity of the heroine is full of doubts, and is finally revealed. He is so wise that he is willing to be a couple for the rest of his life to pave the way for the heroine. He uses all living beings as pawns but is willing to calculate himself for the heroine. It feels more like a heroine novel. The only thing is that the emotional line between the male and female protagonists is too small. Most of them are expressed by the male protagonist. The ending is a little unsatisfactory, but overall it is good and good-looking!

I feel a little tired. I watched and listened to it for a few days. It is too long and boring, and there is too little interaction between the male and female protagonists. It is a pure story of the growth of the female protagonist as a martial arts master. Maybe it is the early work of General Yebei, or it is not to my taste.

I like Ye Beida's books. I read this one a long time ago. I wanted to review it again. I couldn't stand it after reading more than 60 chapters. I found that this book is really not good. Neither the character setting nor the plot are very good. How can you say that the heroine's father is also the head of three major aristocratic families, he is useless and bloodless, and he has no choice but to watch things unfold when his daughter is being poisoned, deprived of power, and persecuted? Even if you are poisoned and feel unwell, doesn't a dignified family head have his own connections and secret guards? Just waiting to be killed by the great elder who seizes power and do nothing? And the heroine is also the same. She is obviously reborn, but many things are not planned out. She still feels like she is being carried away by the plot. She doesn't fight back much when faced with scumbag men and bitches. She will turn the wheel when others ask her to, lift the veil when asked, and then ask the troublemaker if you are satisfied before leaving? How is this different from falling into a self-evident trap? The same thing happened when the second elder came out of seclusion. I felt that the heroine knew how things would develop after she came back and had the ability to prepare and plan some things in advance, but she didn't. It was just that the heroine knew to get some foreign objects that were good for the heroine in advance. She never avoids risks in this kind of important relationship between characters in advance. It's really uncomfortable to watch. I've seen too many smart and strategizing female protagonists. There are really too many flaws in this kind of thing. I'd better go and rewatch The Miracle Doctor.

It's too ink-stained. One plot requires ink-staining. There are several ink-stains. It's too ink-stained.

Generally speaking, let's talk about the shortcomings first: there are a lot of typos, there are at least four typos in two sentences. Second: they don't match up. When the heroine was reborn, she clearly stated that the heroine's previous life was only at the saint level, and later said it was higher. Third: the male protagonist has very few roles, and they are together with almost no interaction. Fourth: the length of one chapter is very small, only about a few hundred words (she can divide the content of one chapter of other authors into three chapters). Fifth: the heroine is really stupid sometimes. The heroine still can't figure out something that is obviously obvious, and she has already confessed before that Lingyan knew she was reborn, but didn't know it later. Sixth: There are a lot of cannon fodder scenes. Every time the heroine pretends to be a pig and eats a tiger, I can write two articles about passers-by.

How can I put it this way? The first part of the plot was really interesting, but the second part was really not good. When the heroine wanted to leave and then joined the academy to become a tutor, it started to not look good. It may also be my personal reasons. I gave up on the second part of the story. The first part was pretty good.

Wonderful and refreshing article, interesting! … But there are too many typos!!

The plot is procrastinating, completely for the sake of earning money, and many details are not reflected in the follow-up. The same is true here in the Supreme Temple. He ran away inexplicably and became a teacher? There are a lot of bits and pieces of the plot here. It takes at least 300 chapters to find the biological mother while being a teacher. In the first continent, there are also many people and details that are not coherent. When you return to the first domain, you haven't even finished the plot before you come back to fill the cup? The writing is top-heavy and my level is limited. I hope I can polish it well.