My Sect Went Bankrupt, So I Came Down the Mountain Invincible!

The author's writing is good. This is the most desolate gym I have ever read in a fairy tale (there are only two people), and it went bankrupt at the beginning. I really didn't expect this. Other aspects of the content are quite satisfactory and do not deviate from the setting of the fairy tale. You can pass the time and read it.

The hero is so stingy, his girlfriend has been waiting for you for ten years, misunderstood you, and finally apologized to you, but still doesn't forgive her.

This is pretty good and not too verbose, but can you add a chapter number?

What are you writing about? It takes a long time to fight someone in the Nascent Soul realm who is two realms lower than you. For fun, if you don't know how to write, just don't write.

There are quite a lot of characters created. Although the male protagonist is a bit stupid, he has a righteous heart. The world is dangerous but there is also a lot of warmth.

The beginning is really boring. The master at the beginning is a bastard. My sister and my mother are both violated. My father has become a cripple. After ten years, everything has happened. Is the protagonist the evil star? No interest in leaving!

Nascent Soul can make the foundation-building ones run away, which is really awesome.

It's so disgusting. A woman who has been waiting for the male protagonist for 10 years finally got nothing. The so-called immortals have different excuses, tsk tsk tsk tsk... I wonder how many women can spend the best 10 years waiting for you in the world of mortals! Is there any difference between immortals and mortals? Your own parents can practice martial arts without spiritual roots, but you can't even predict the spiritual roots of the woman waiting for you! It made me laugh to death. I don't think this woman is worth it. She is sensitive and has a bit of a paranoid personality. As a male protagonist, she has a good personality? Can't stand it at all? Can't you try to persuade me? Emotions are created through hard work. There is only one difference between immortals and mortals, it is either a harem or a harem, even if the delicate description of feelings is poisonous, please don't be disgusted...

The pig's foot mountain is like a two-ball. Yuanying is not as strong as Yuanying.

The story is still good, but can we separate those who practice martial arts and those who cultivate immortality? No matter how powerful the martial arts practitioners in traditional immortal cultivation novels are, they are nothing more than ants when it comes to immortal cultivators in the Qi training stage. In the urban immortal cultivation novels, the martial arts practitioners are comparable to the Golden Core Yuanying, but they are still cultivators.