Cultivation Game: Starting My Journey as a Mouse

Only the chapters that have been read will be evaluated, and there will be no comment on the chapters that have not been read. This book is well written

What on earth do you want to write? I thought it was about evolution at first, but then I met a little girl who thought it was about the favor of gods, and was kicked out of the mountain to start cultivating immortality. There is also a realm. After the third level of the monster beast, it returns to the first level of physical training of the human system, which is neither fish nor fowl. It is better to write directly according to the monster system. From now on, monsters will be monster kings, monster kings, monster kings, monster emperors, and monster emperors. Spiritual beasts, monsters, monsters, forging bodies, building foundations, forming elixirs, transforming into gods, overcoming tribulations, both human and demonic.

The protagonist gave me the feeling that he was very stupid. He stole things at first and then raised younger brothers to raise younger brothers and raise more younger brothers. Then he joined the mountain to raise younger brothers. What happened to Rhubarb and how he was discovered? There was no foreshadowing. Humans he didn't know were caught. Just because you want to kill people, you insist on offending others and letting them go. No big brother, you are a monster. If you don't eat people, you still have humanity, but humans are the opposite of you. You offend your boss in order to save others. It's useless to suffer a loss but not to thank you. Later, he was threatened even more, but he immediately admitted that he had a hard time and even joined his camp. Although Jiaolong helped you, the carp showed you the way. Then he just focused on Jiaolong Lake. Isn't Xiong Er your good brother? He gave you good things everywhere just for the sake of big brother. In the end, you were caught and you couldn't even let out a fart. One of them has a white face and the other has a red face, and they really fooled the protagonist into entering Jiaolong Lake.

The previous plot is quite exciting, but the Qingfeng ancestor in the back has a lot of problems. If he can escape by jumping off a cliff and falling into the water against the current, then it is impossible for the protagonist to escape with his magic power. There is no need to sacrifice the little girl to detoxify the protagonist. And how does the golden bell protect the protagonist? If you just build it on top, others won't lift up all the surrounding land, and then use a sealing circle to seal you? Mainly because it doesn't work here. Overall, the novel is quite good.

As an ordinary student who travels through the soul, he encounters all kinds of things on the road, and has different choices. From immature to mentally mature and slowly getting better, it is very real. It is not as exciting as other cool novels, and there is no harem or anything. The setting is also very interesting, and the plot is also ups and downs. I hope the author will write better and better.

It looks good. Please update it. It's too little.

I was persuaded to quit by Chapter 29. I felt that the plot written by the author was a bit scattered and confusing, without a clear main body. According to the previous description, since the protagonist has accepted so many younger brothers, and in order of ranking, Xiong Er, Sanhua, and Si Niang should be developing their own power, and they have also allocated their own training resources to upgrade them. They should be taken with them to develop their power, but in the end they defected. Tiger King, in one sentence, he gave the transformed cat girl to others to play with, and he has nurtured his loyal little brother for so long. I really can't understand it, and it's also very baffling. What's the point of foreshadowing all this at the beginning, adopting them and wasting resources, and rescuing her, or what is the author's hobby? In short, I can't watch this chapter anymore. These are some of my personal opinions.

Hurry up and update. Author, please, I'll give you all the votes. Hurry up and update.

I was really confused when I saw the part where the cat girl was given away. You laid the groundwork for so long and finally gave it away. Otherwise, you wouldn't have written it. I was really disgusted by it. You had to give me a cyber hat to read a novel.

It's so disgusting. It made me vomit before. Forcibly subduing my wits. I even sacrificed my little brother to the tiger king. It's disgusting. It's so disgusting. It's such a failure. It's already been like this. How can I continue to read it? It makes sense to read more negative reviews. The author should also read more!