The Invincible Slaughter System

Very well written and lengthy.

Getting stupider and stupider

It's a bit misleading. Since it's a system, you can upgrade it if you have experience in killing people. Compared with other systems, this book is garbage.

It's okay, but it's too bland and a bit long-winded.

The writing is too verbose. Just simplify 7 million words into 3 million words. For example, if you write a 1,000-word document, 900 words are devoted to explanations. It is too verbose. Do you not know how to write it? Now everyone understands the nine-year compulsory education. It's too wordy and makes people feel spicy🐔 I suggest the author start with two to three million words and write something that will upgrade the realm faster, be more humorous, have more powerful combat power, and explain less. The explanation can be written in one sentence. This way the author's book does much better. The author must learn to change

Is this also called an invincible system? It should be called a useless system, but it's more like a system. If there is a system, you have to fight life and death to get the resources for training so that you can practice.

I feel that the writing is okay. Compared with those novels where killing can improve your cultivation, it is much more realistic. And I like to see the protagonist improve his strength through his own efforts instead of relying on some evil tricks. There are a few chapters in the middle that are mixed up, that is, Chapter 1840 to 1843. Overall, I feel that the writing is pretty good. The plot is out of ten, so I will give it an 8.3. I'd give it an 8.7 For writing. The bad thing about the writing is: the title of the book is a bit too exaggerated

Nice

The system's presence is gone

The Holy Mother was forced to become a murderer.