Apprenticed to Uncle Jiu, I Simplified the Golden Light Mantra from the Start

The parts with the original movie are all in a mess, not to mention the content compiled by the author himself. I have never seen an author with such a limited vocabulary. There are a lot of scene descriptions, psychological descriptions, character descriptions, etc., All of which are the same sentences and single words, which are repeated like a repeater. For example, the word "firm" appears almost 400 times in 500 chapters; and every eye will flash, chapter after chapter; every time it is either sunshine or moonlight. It was so boring that I couldn't stand it anymore, so I gave up.

Ahem, please listen to me. This book is well written, the plot is touching, the content is ups and downs, the ending is unexpected, the content is resonant, and the meaning is thought-provoking. It is one of the rare good books I have encountered in the past ten years. The only regret is that I have not read a word of it.

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The first plot is poisonous. A wild Feng Shui master should be the bottom rubbish in the monastic world, but it turns out that Jiu Shu, Si Mu, Shi Jian, and the protagonist, Qiu Sheng, who has improved his cultivation, have not been beaten. It was the ancestor who broke the rules and left the underworld to deal with it. If you are so powerful in the jungle, why would you join a big sect? You can just do jungle.

After seeing 56% of the content, there is no need to look back. The fighting force behind it is very confusing. The male protagonist in the Earth Master Realm fights an old mortal man back and forth, and the male protagonist has to shake sand to win. In the blink of an eye, the male protagonist can conquer the four great beasts, go to the small world, go to heaven and go to hell. In short, the plot of Musical Zombie is very confusing from now on.

It was okay at first, but then it started to get wet. What kind of eyes have the universe and the light? What kind of Qi is like the universe? It's really unbelievable. It's a person who is like the universe.

How did you write it like this? I won't tell you the full title of the plot. How come the place where you wrote it is so outrageous? A wild Feng Shui master is so awesome. There are forty zombies in total. The protagonist has practiced so many golden light spells, lightning spells, physical training and so on. He is just like a waste and can only play support, right? And Lin Jiu Shijian and Si Mu are so incompetent that any kid can come in.

If you copy the original work, you won't even bother to change the plot, right? Moreover, what's the point of the protagonist going through the system even though he's like a licking dog with no sense of existence? See how much he, Uncle Jiu and his senior brothers love each other?

The Japanese fat man is dead. Wouldn't it be possible to spy on his soul and ask? They are all Taoist priests, brother.

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