Start: the Little Witch Gives Me a Saint Daughter-In-Law

The protagonist has such a mysterious physique, and the result is the same as Xiaobai's first entry into society. He feels uncomfortable when he looks at it. Don't be too real. Oh my god, he is either at a critical moment of life or death. If you want to read a cool story, you can withdraw first. If you put a skill, your leg will be broken. You don't have a trump card in your hand. A female protagonist is streaming. The other one I thought was very strong, but in fact it was just like that. "The decent ones were instigated to besiege the decent saints" was withdrawn, withdrawn, I wanted to turn black when I saw it. When I woke up from the illusion, I said I was dreaming, and then I watched the video. I almost thought it was a mess and wanted to curse, ah Minos! !

Although it is not the cool novel that I imagined, I like to read non-fun novels. The logic is smooth and the plot is interesting. It gave me a lot of surprises. I like the feeling that the follow-up is unexpected and great.

Currently updated to 190, I saw 60 chapters. Tested. The biggest problem with this book is its inconsistent style. The male protagonist is both humorous and scheming. This is difficult to deal with. Generally speaking, these two points can't coexist. One moment, the hero is describing how the hero still doesn't let down his guard after fighting against the wolves, and the next moment, he's joking that Zhi Yuan looks like a Nascent Soul colored pen. Gives me a jumping feeling. Moreover, if the male protagonist is scheming, then others will see through it. What is this scheming? Nangong Witch and Zhiyuan all saw it. How can it be called a conspiracy? It was a failure to hide it. The funniest thing is that Zhiyuan saw that he was hiding the knife and pretended to be frightened to blame him, but the male protagonist did not notice that she was acting. This... What exactly is it trying to express? Is the male protagonist's inexperience highlighted? The plot has no main line and the characters' actions lack logic. The demonic side is not very smart. In order to reach the threshold of becoming an immortal, they sacrifice an entire city, and in the end everyone is wiped out. I'm surprised, if you don't enjoy all the blessings in this world, why do you have to fight against such an almost impossible probability? By the way, you destroyed all the foundations. Did you pick up this city? If there are precedents for others to become immortals, then let them do it this way. After a long time, the righteous brothers came over and left them alone to watch, but they still couldn't succeed. There is something wrong with their intelligence. Then the question comes again, what does this plot want to express? After a long time of preparation, in order to survive under the high pressure of the city lord, the witch kidnapped the saint, ambushed the gangster, and asked the male protagonist to make suggestions. Wori, oh, suddenly the whole city was gone. So what's the use of foreshadowing? I feel like the author just wanted the male protagonist to escape, so he arranged a plot like this and got rid of it... The righteous side doesn't seem to be very righteous either. They are eager to share the spoils after making deals with the Demon Cult and massacre of the city. Oh, and the saint's senior brother is also quite abstract, a stalker. To sum up, the character's behavior has no purpose. Although it seems to be very scheming, in fact it has no hook. I just write whatever I think of. A bunch of seemingly inscrutable foreshadowings were buried, but in the end they were of no use. It is recommended that you either use scheming as the main line, break up the situation, and occasionally use humor in daily life; or you use comedy as the main line, and the language is usually light and funny, leaving aside the so-called scheming in the details, burying the conspiracy in the overall situation, and erupting at the end of each chapter. I hope the author can improve 🙏

After reading about a hundred chapters, it started out well and was very novel, but gradually it became unreadable and the plot was too bland. First, he prostituted a saint for free at the beginning, and was kidnapped by the witch. Then the cheat came to his account. He broke through the first level of Qi training and killed the monks in the foundation period. Then for some reason, the witch's personal maid became fond of the protagonist. Then the saint came to take revenge. After seeing the cheat of the protagonist, she suddenly had a liking for the protagonist. After a while, the witch also had a liking for the protagonist😆. Then the Western Region was Destroyed, the protagonist begins to go to the Central Realm. The Saint discovers that she falls in love with the Protagonist and begins to look for the Protagonist (the Saint's senior brother is a boiling sheep). After the Witch leaves the Protagonist, she realizes that she cannot live without the Protagonist, and then goes to the Central Realm to look for the Protagonist. The Protagonist flirts with a maid on the way to the Central Realm (the Protagonist is still at the first level of Qi training). I rate it as a six-level performance. 😆😆😆😆😆😆

The first review gave you this book

IQ Online, the beginning is very novel, I hope the rest will be equally exciting

It can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in online writing, and it is rigorous enough. Come on, author, the golden light will always shine.

The idea is fine, but the things written should not be prioritized. The eye-catching part of the opening and the indescribable details can be omitted, but the psychological dialogue before and after the character's attitude is not clear, but it's okay. As a result, I met two brats immediately afterwards, and spent a lot of space writing about how they were bullied, and the protagonist was beaten as if he was talking down. Wu Nao Jiang Zhi took the initiative to attack and was beaten again. Being trapped in a stinking place like a pig pen with no food to eat, and then someone finally came to rescue him, and the protagonist's backer came, and then the fate of those two idiots was briefly mentioned and not written? You make readers pinch their noses to see that there is nothing after a long paragraph of abuse, so what is the purpose of writing this?

Come on, just give all the tickets away

It's a useless book. The cool one can be withdrawn. I feel like my brain has been insulted.