Quick Wear: Bai Yueguang Is a Fishing Beauty

The writing style is a bit immature, the emotional line is a bit fast, and I won't mention the typos. There are so many that they could be included in a separate book.

Overall, it looks good

I have read several worlds, and the writing style is indeed relatively immature. If you are a fan of more advanced books, you can read other articles, but the author has written very well, and I hope he can continue to work hard. There is still a lot of room for improvement.

I have a long, long story that will take me a lifetime to tell you slowly.

So embarrassing

The writing is immature, with many typos and the plot is incoherent.

There are ridiculously many typos, the writing is immature, and the most important thing is that the heroine was tricked. In the second plane, it was originally written that the heroine has seen all living beings, various life and death separations, and thought that the heroine would be more interested. However, it turned out that the co-author either experienced it personally or was not interested, and the system was unreliable at the critical moment. If the male protagonist had not come, the heroine would not have known what happened. Fortunately, this is the heroine. Ordinary people wouldn't know how she would be tricked to death. Originally, I didn't plan to watch anything sadistic in the first place, after all, the heroine's IQ is pretty bad. Sweet love, but in the end, the second plane was written like that

There are too many typos, and why is it always "two kinds" instead of "two kinds"? It sounds really uncomfortable.

Beautiful, sweet article

There are too many typos and the logic is not very rigorous.