Soul Land V: Bibi Dong Picked Me Up and Took Me to Spirit Hall from the Start!

The system seems pretty useless. I honestly didn't understand the avalanche scene. I don't believe someone as powerful as Gu Du Bo could be that blind. Later, they even wrote that Xue Beng wanted to marry Gu Du Yan and use Gu Du Bo to suppress Xue Qing He—he wouldn't even recognize her standing right in front of him.

Why haven't you updated? I've been waiting for a year... Please come back... I absolutely love this book... (￣Д￣)ﾉ

Seeing the chapter about taking Meng Yiran as a disciple, it was so cruel. You villains can take on disciples without considering their aptitude and even help them improve, but you agree to conditions set by someone with poor aptitude? Are you sure you're a villain and not a sycophant? As the saying goes, I can give, but you can't take.

I've looked at so many Douluo Continent fanfics, and they all have harems, but this one only has one female lead. I'm so upset the author is crying.

The writing is too verbose and riddled with filler. It omits essential information while devoting excessive space to unnecessary details. It also constantly plays the victim, with a ton of flaws. For example, the elixir made from immortal herbs can upgrade a martial soul and soul power, but the protagonist refuses to consume it.

A very good book

Well written

Update quickly! Aside from the slow updates, everything else is great.

The update is a little slow. Please update soon! 😘🤗

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