Dominance of Another World Begins with a Snake

It's pretty good-looking, but the style has completely changed in the back

It was fine in the early stage, but it didn't work well in the later period. It didn't work well in the later period, and I had to change someone to write it.

Gift drug jazz toss shy stylus fuzes the pad PA PS ewa

It's OK in the early stage, but not in the later stage. I feel like the author's general outline is a bit messed up. Did he find someone to write it for him?

The previous ones are okay, no big problems, but starting from Chapter 245 when the protagonist joins the sect. Written with. . The same, just to highlight the grievances and grievances between the protagonist and the stepping stone. It also caused the sects to be in conflict, with the sect elders being stupid. Same. I basically danced through those few pictures and couldn't even read them at all.

At the beginning of Chapter 35, the characters of wisdom and water are forcibly introduced. Negative review

So beautiful and interesting

Very new and too slow

The problem with matryoshka dolls is that the last one is left unkilled! ! ! It's not enough. A stroke of arrogance

I have reached the fifth level of cultivation and still can't fly. Bad review. I have a flying skill that is unrivaled in the world.