Pokemon: The Strongest Haruka

Compared with Shinji's previous novels, in terms of plot and writing control, I think Xiaomao should be in a state of change and improvement. There's no point in praising yourself, anyway. Hope you all like it~

I'm quite disappointed. I've read Shinji's book, but I couldn't get into it at all because Shinji's dead fish eyes were ugly, but I still saw the Sinnoh region. Xiaozhi has also finished watching a lot of Da Gai Chengdu. This book made me dizzy when I read it. Every girl is ambiguous about two-thirds of this book. What annoys me is that when I wrote the second letter to Johto, I just let myself go, right? It's completely based on the plot of Teacher Lu's book, right? How about a little bit of your own shadow? I read that one seven or eight times and when I read yours, I felt like I was reading a crude version of Teacher Lu. Don't accuse me of being disrespectful. People who want to criticize me for this comment must have a good conscience and think about how fucking much Teacher Lu's shadow has been since the Johto area? Innovation is no longer innovative, right? Just change Lu Ye to Xiao Mao. 9.5 Points plus I came in and found out it was Shinji. I thought it was good, then I squinted my eyes and felt uncomfortable, and finally ended up with this comment. Now the pm fanfic is really bad. No wonder the two bosses have turned to the beast-control novel to take the last sip of soup. After posting it, just read the latest chapter. It's still like that, then it's fate to see you again or never to see you again.

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No? The key to Pokémon writing is that your Pokémon doesn't take up as much space as women. Is it because you can't travel without a woman by your side? I've read more than a hundred chapters, and I'm either having an affair with this woman or that woman. The length of writing about Pokémon battles and training is pitiful. It's a love story wrapped in Pokémon skin, right? The key is that you haven't written a good love story either. She's a woman who gets excited when she sees the protagonist, right? Innate succubus body? It's neither sweet nor sweet, just all kinds of awkward chats. I felt sleepy watching the whole process.

I hope I won't become the Six-Sealed Heavenly Lord

It's still a trustworthy and interesting writing style. I hope it doesn't take away from Xiaozhi. That's why I quit Shinji's book. The ones written later on Xiaozhi are okay. I hope this book has elite soldiers and not too many elves.

After thinking about it for a long time, I'd like to complain. I've read the novels written by you (Ash, Shinji) on Tomato before, but I only read half of them and didn't want to read them anymore. I could only read them at the beginning, but as I went to the end, I felt that there were too many private things and too much of the author's subjective thoughts. As for this book, I think Qimao's boasting attracted many gods, but there are some poisonous points at the beginning, such as small poisonous points (acceptable): the qualification setting is not reasonable; system props improve qualifications (Pokémon World actually has props that can improve qualifications); high-qualification Pokémon in the wild Random encounters in dreams; some plots are forced, etc., The biggest poisonous point (for me): the ambiguity is inexplicable, Ke Na and Xiao Mao are at least ten years apart, and you are also ambiguous, and the three Hualan sisters are also involved. I am not saying that the protagonist should be single or anything, but I am disgusted with this kind of casual ambiguity.

Well written

Pretty good

If there is anyone who is the most pitiable among Pokémon, besides Shinji, it is Mamoru.