My Mistress Is a Very Dangerous Thing

It's not good to watch. At first I just thought it was novel and I like curious novels, but after reading more than a hundred chapters, I found it boring. I have taken in a few women, but no double cultivators. Throughout the novel, new characters, new plots, and new villains are added all the time. The protagonist does not have any growth scenes. In the beginning, I wrote about how miserable the protagonist is with how little he has learned. Later, he found that no matter who he fights, he can win 50-50. From the very beginning, a ghost who just died a few days ago, to the villains in the later, it is 50-50. The protagonist has not grown up, and success depends entirely on luck. Occasionally, I rely on the help of Mrs. Bai. Although Mrs. Bai is very powerful in writing, she actually doesn't help much. I know she is afraid of stealing the protagonist's role, but such a weak protagonist can still win in high-end games. I am speechless. This is the only novel in which the protagonist cannot become stronger.

The suspense stories written by the author are actually erotic stories. It can be said that almost every chapter is about this. The protagonist is not only brainless and impulsive but has no strength, but also loves to cause trouble. Every time he is tricked by the villain, he regrets it. Don't write about realm or anything like that, strength depends entirely on feeling.，，，， My advice is. Reinvent the wheel

A man toyed with a woman in captivity for two years, thinking about letting her go, and then wanted her to be grateful to him? Editor, how dare you think about it? I think you are not suitable to live on Earth. How about you go to Mars? Maybe no one will look down on you there.

It's really rubbish. I've been having sex like crazy. The last time I met a girl, I just had sex. And I couldn't defeat the villain at all. It was just a coincidence that I won the big win. I won by chance every time. I was really speechless😓. The plot was too bad.

This is the first time I read a novel. I finished it in less than three days. The front part is okay, but the back part is too confusing. I'm confused after reading it. I won't talk about other questions for now, but I want to ask the author. First of all, where did Aning go? I said before that I would come back right away if something happened, but it had been too long. Have you forgotten her? And Ah Qi, it was said earlier that she was an ancient demon and recognized the protagonist as her brother, but now she is written as an ordinary person, and the protagonist also has a relationship with her? Really invincible, and Xia Rou, the previous wives except Sister Bai have all been written off, and now Xia Rou is gone again, she said she would go to the city to find something to do, okay, okay, okay, okay, the protagonist doesn't care? Sister Bai and her daughter don't care anymore? Murong Xue is gone too? There was also Bao Changsheng, who didn't say where he went? Sister Ling didn't show up either. I want to know who this damn Lu Ming really loves? Meet one and love the other? I now feel that he is not worthy of being the protagonist. Also, what happened to the author's memory? Changed people, what else? Has no one considered the readers' feelings? There are so many pitfalls filled in at the beginning, no one cares about them, and then I write all the way to the back. The people who were close to the protagonist before are gone, and there are a few new wives in exchange. It seems that I don't plan to care about other people, so I will just write about these new wives? Protagonist, is this person worthy of being the protagonist? There are still many questions I want to ask, but I feel very uncomfortable now. I want to ask the author what he wants to do? Can you still write well? Please consider us readers, especially a newbie like me. After reading the latest chapter, I always feel suffocated and uncomfortable. Can the author see what I am saying? I beg you, please consider what I say.

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I sorted it out: The protagonist has the same fate in three lives. In the first life, he is changing the sky and is a pair with Xuanyin. In the second life, he is Jiuye and is a team with Sister Bai. Now is the third life. At the beginning, there were Sister Bai and four spirits (now Su Ling is still alive and I don't know where she is?), And later joined Yingying (the daughter of Zhang Dahai, suspected to be Huang Taixian (dead)), and Xia Rou (Longyang Shanren, now Daxian). Revenge has been avenged and they live on their own in the county), Sister Ling (an ordinary person with a prominent family background.), Ci Yun and Ah Qi (who were said to be ancient demons at first, but now become ordinary people and hope the author will fill in the gaps later), and Ah Ning, who has no movement, feel that the author has forgotten. Recently, Julie (a cat demon, probably a high-level demon), Zhuoyu (a big turtle, whose ancient bloodline should also be at the level of a great demon), Han Han (a nightmare, a high-level demon who is good at illusions), Xuanyin (a sealed god, a lover who changes from heaven), and Jiang Ji (the only child of the Jiang family, a great demon at the peak of strength) have been added. Enemies: Zhang Paozi (dead), Lao San and his gang (and Sister Wan, probably gone too), the family-killing enemies (all dead), Su Ling's four demons (only Su Ling has broken through the big demon, the others are dead), the traitor Long Ge (said at the beginning) The noble man has now become a traitor and has changed from an ordinary person to a cultivated person), Mo Wangting (the strength of the ancient demon should be), the evil god (should be able to break through the divine level once awakened), Pang Tianlong (the dragon of Ruyun, now also the ancient demon's strength can break through the divine level before). Statistics of women eaten by the protagonist: Sister Bai, Four Demons of Su Ling, Zhang Yingying, Xia Rou, Sister Ling, Liuli (forgot the name), Zhu Yu, Sister Wan, Lily, Xuanyin, Han Han, there is also a woman from the virgin forest, a woman who likes the protagonist but was defiled and committed suicide (Jiang Ji is about to die), a policeman, and a widow who bought gold. Statistics of bugs and pitfalls in the author's article: 1. Ah Ning is missing? 2. Ah Qi transformed from an ancient demon into an ordinary person 3. The combat power in the article is a bit broken. 4. The woman who stole the corpse before beating Zhang Yizi (basement) 5. Forgot the house spirit and corpse 6. I still don't understand what happened to Yingying. 7. The strength of the Jiuye Taoist priest in the previous life has not been realized 8. Welcome to add

Nice

The plot of this book is ups and downs, exciting, both plot and writing are excellent!

Later, the hips are stretched more and more. The battle may be an older leftover girl. She has never been in love. Let the protagonist be like Teddy and just get along with everyone he sees.