Alliance: Are You Stuck in My Contract? Turn Around and Run Away with Uzi!

Nice! Keep up the good work!

It's well written, but updates are too slow. There is no lowering of other people's IQ, no heroine, no stallion story! It's basically all competitions. It feels good to be able to highlight the characteristics of LoL through simple competitions. Basically, when writing competition novels now, the content of the competition will be written more interestingly. This is a common problem, but this one is okay and I can read it! Well, through the emotions evoked by these things, I prefer

The plot is confusing and misleading. Stop writing and give up. You won't be able to eat this bowl of rice.

What is written at the end? The name is wrong, there are various typos, and the names of people are all wrong. Is it copied from somewhere else? I sent it directly without modification.

Later on, the plot started to get confusing. The protagonist had no sense at all and became a supporting role. The role of the golden finger disappeared immediately, and the details were gone. It started to get boring almost halfway through the writing. Later, it got so boring that I retreated.

Let's put it this way, the small flaws and poor areas have been mentioned, which is not too much, but there are problems in the general direction. It is a good game novel, live broadcast and singing. If you insist on explaining that it is for making money, it can be said. After MSI, pig's feet cheats are as dead as S7. Even if ig wakes up early, it will be at most a fledgling scale. Compared with SKT, it will definitely be not one or two points worse (no Han Biao meaning. The most important thing is that The shy is missing) ) In the end, the pig's trotters team felt like they were about to lose. The matchup against SKT was incomprehensible and S7 was not fully integrated. IG was a muggle. It was really funny. If you don't want to be cheated, just turn it off. It's more than 100 chapters. It's said that it's a mess. It turns out that it's cs go, it's the king, it's selling goods, it's a fan club. It's just like a cow horse. MSI has finished the intercontinental competition, and the pig's trotters data is still over 60-70. You might as well write entertainment articles and stop playing games.

What do you mean, why does a League of Legends novel have so many other plots? It's the MasterChef competition again, and it's racing. There is no detailed description of the key rounds of the game. It's all written in a hasty manner, and all the unnecessary plot points are written in great detail.

The flash has no CD, and other attributes are 0. A 99-level proficiency witch with full proficiency can kill faker. The live broadcast contract is stuck and she is still live broadcasting. I can't see it.

Olaf flashed and scurried away. I couldn't understand.

The first half is very interesting, the various trouble-making and various programs are very interesting, the game content is also well written, there are plots and twists, the middle and rear rescues are becoming more and more boring. I often write several chapters about the competition process of other teams, and when it is my turn to compete, I will go over it in one stroke. There are more and more details and errors. It is half a good book.