Nine Turns to Immortality

Overall, I feel it's generally okay. There are some parts that you could refine a bit, put more thought into. For example, when Li Changsheng had just formed his Nascent Soul, you actually wrote that he played with a dog and even beat it up. I almost died laughing at that. Overall, though, it's not bad.

When will Zhang Yumo return?

I hope Li Changsheng doesn't fall apart later on!

This book and its title are so mismatched. Where does the idea of ​​"Nine Revolutions to Immortality" come from? They might as well just name it "Ascending to Immortality."

Traditional cultivation novels are still to my liking, but I wonder if it will end up like other books where characters are killed off one by one, which would ruin the fun.

I've read 30 chapters. It's a very basic novel, riddled with plot holes, dialogue, action sequences, and fight scenes. Many parts are described in absurdly and bizarrely. There's nothing interesting or engaging about it, so I can't continue.

The leveling up was a bit too fast! The subscription ended after only 80-something chapters.

It looks pretty good, it would be better if it were a bit more original.

Be aware that the ending was poorly done.

A light novel